Hum... Anakin first words to Padme were "Are you an angel ?"
To say that he didn't fall in love with her because he befriended the others handmaidens is nonsensical. Not to mention that since Obi Wan did absolutely nothing to change Anakin's interactions with the handmaiden, why should there be any difference from the first time around ?
Everything in this story is really too convenient : for example Anakin's inaction during the battle should have had consequences, but nope it conveniently didn't change anything. What's next ? Palpatine gonna slip in his shower and die ?

Short, but I loved your characterization.

why are you just ending this story? please continue it, I implore you it's a great story to expand on and show the action between the sabewan pairing and the anidala pairing.

Hi. I’m Spiritual_Moon. I’d like to tell you how amazing you are to make a story like this. I was looking for a Star Wars fanfiction like this and it fits the bill perfectly. So Thank you for the amazing story.
-Spirit

This is one of the few time travel stories that I've read and pulled a general positive mood, so in other words great job.

are you finishing this story or what ?

This was a good story, I did like it. Thanks for sharing!

WTF! Becoming the Hero of Naboo is Anakin's *GREATEST* achievement! How DARE OBI-WAN TAKE IT AWAY FROM HIM! Now Anakin is a nobody. Figures, Obi-Wan wants the glory for himself. And Obi-Wan's an idiot for believing nobody can come back from the Dark Side. Self-righteous BASTARD.

See. This is why I hate Obi-Wan Kenobi.

Had Obi-Wan have fallen to the Dark Side, Anakin Skywalker would *NOT* have fought him. He would have tried to save his soul and if that didn't work, he would flee, rather than engaging his friend in a duel. By fighting Anakin, Obi-Wan betrayed him. All because of the stupid Jedi Code.

Sure, Anakin killed a few dozen people, but when you compare that to the *BILLIONS* of lives he saved during the Clone Wars and before, the GOOD FAR OUT WEIGHT THE BAD!

That was one of the best back-in-time, time-travel star wars story I've read. I always like when obi wan goes back to the past, but this one was a particularly good one. It had all emotions that make a good story; sadness, happiness, fear, intensity...ext. I'm definitely checking out your profile to see what else you've done:)

This is really good. Please make a sequel or continue this story.

Your story was already ruined by the end of your summary. Portraying the force as entirely sentient, and prone to emotion, takes most of the mystique out of it and completely beggars belief. It's an incredibly stupid premise for the story.

I like this story. I have also read Shadows of the Future. This is completely different and very well done. I like the changes made (Obi Wan and Sabe) and hope their future is a happy one. Of course that is but one of the possibilities. I'd like to hear of the future demise of Sideous but that is another story too. Thank you for your wonderful story.

Lovely story. I thought it was as good as Shadows, so don't worry. Thanks for writing!

10/10! Sequel please.

Goodwork