Beautiful story!

Everything was perfect, but for 2 things.
I really wish the chapters were longer. You went through the entire LOTR movies in less than 27k words. That's not good.
The other, which kind of ties into the first, is that there was a lot of telling, not showing. Like how we are told that Sera is a Sorceress, yet she never uses magic. Like how you never describe things that aren't direct scenes in the movie, bar a few times.

All that said, Zera is a wonderful OC! And I truly enjoyed this story!

I really enjoyed this story so much

I can't believe that it's finally over.

I wish that it could of been alittle longer.

! I LOVED IT! THAT WAS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! Woohooooooohoooooooooooooo! I loved it babe! *grins* Kids... WOOHOOHOOOOOOOOOO! Z won't hate me for ruining her love life!

I loved it! it was so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!

Hey pretty good! I dont usually appreciate character add ins(being kinda a purist with LOTR) but it was pretty good. ps have you read eragon? the sorcery sounds a bit like that... oh, and a stallion is a male horse, not a mare. minor point but horses are my life so details like that stand out to me... anyways ,keep it up!

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The only bad thing in here is that you never ever gave things an original twist. It was mainly the same as the movies, except for a few details like Zera being there and Eomer falling in love with her. Beautifully written but not really that original.

Omg yay they finally kiss lol can't wait 4 the nxt chptr.

Plz update soon

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Nicely done! And Frodo's alive! yay thats very good! no awesome! yay I cna't wait for the next chapter! update soon please

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*clears throat* Oh yeah... GREAT JOB! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! LOVED IT!

WOOHOOHOO! They're going to take their rightful place now aren't they? Aragorn *drools*. Loved it babe! SO cannot wait for the rest of the movie! And to actually watch it! LOL!

WOOT! Eomer and Zera! WOOHOOHOO! *grins* Loved it babe! Awesome friggin job! Cannot wait for more! Woot!

No its not just the lack of sleep. I see a pattern as well. Middle earth is a freaky bit of constant war. Good job!

Silent words: I love you. *grins* Friggin loved it babe! Awesome job! Woohoohoo! Can't wait for more!

Hmm well I will soon be very unconfused. I borrowed the movies from my friend Justine. Good job and I can't wait for the next chapter!