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arimamatsui chapter 8 . 8/26 Cool please more️ |
Mirror Kyaw chapter 8 . 4/3 I think it's the kiss that wears off the enchantment |
Anonymous chapter 8 . 8/7/2019 *holds out empty bowl* more plz? Needs good ending can't finish here. I don't care if it's the next chapter where it said "In the end Arthur kissed Merlin when they found out the problem and fixed it to get Merlin older, then they lived happily ever after!" |
0000 chapter 7 . 12/4/2018 merlin ages if arthus fulfills his requests btw i love it it's soo good |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/31/2018 Excellent plot. Please come back and finish this. |
gaylelbf chapter 8 . 7/24/2018 Enjoying this story tremendously. Would really like to see it continued. |
alice chapter 2 . 6/25/2018 Alice by a magician was turned into a two years old girl and Kayley who was walking with her parents at the seaside saw her and she said:Mom Dad look is that cousin Alice?. Sir Lionel looked over and saw that the two years old girl had a very clear resemblance with his niece and he said:Dear lord jesus she's turned into an infant. Because he shouted it so loud Alice age 2 started wailing and tears streamed her little eyes and Lady Juliana scolded her husband:Now look what did You do You scared her Oh poor little darling girl. She walks over to her two-year-old niece and picks her in her arms and said:Shhhhh! ďarling Alice It's allright Mommy's here i won't leave You alone. Alice from the caring voice of Lady Juliana instantly stopped crying as Kayley said:Mom it worked You stopped her from crying. Sir Lionel asked:And what do we do now who's daughter is she going to be? Lady Juliana thought for a moment before saying:Well we'll take care of her and maybe You can take her with You to Camelot. Kayley cheered for she really wanted a little sister and now she would have her and she could teach her how to become a knight. On a family outgoing the two year old Alice was stanfing on her pony and said:Daddy!. Sir Lionel smiled fondly and opened his arms as the two year old girl jumped in there and they rolled on the sand together. Kayley asked her dad:But dad do You really have to go?. He answered:I'm afraid I must Kayley You know the king's knights are gonna come soon and i must explain that Your sister will come too. Alice giggled and clapped her tiny hands as if asking Sir Lionel how did he become a knight. Lady Juliana smiled at her younger daughter's reaction and ssid:Alice You've heard of it a thousand times. Kayley said:Come on mother if little sister wants to become a knight she needs to listen. Sir Lionel told the whole story to his excited two year old daughter and Alice clapped her tiny hands and pointing her tiny hand on his shield as if asking what is with the three circles and he exclaimed:These three circles represend the unity of our kingdom as a knight i took an oath to protect Camelot,King Arthur and Excalibur. Then Alice saw men coming on their horses and Sir Gawain said:Lionel finally what took You so long? (looks at two year old Alice) oh my goodness who's the cute little girl?. Sir Lionel said proudly:She's my daughter Alice and she's two years old. The knights cooed st Alice and sir Gawain said taking her little hand and kissing it:Now i knew Sir Lionel had an older daughter named Kayley but i never knew that she had a younger sister so beautiful and cute like You are. Alice giggled sweetly amusing her father sir Lionel and the knights introduced themselves to her and they went to Camelot. When they reached the palace and entered in there The two year old girl looked with wide eyes from awe and shock at how beautiful Camelot looked. Sir Lionel smiled at her reaction before seeing King Arthur,Queen Guinevere and Merlin standing out of the castle. Sir Gawain was smirking seductively over to the two year old Alice saying:Aren't you a sweet beautiful June's rose yes You are. Sir Lionel chuckled in amusement before saying:Now i think My daughter found her true love with You sir Gawain. He nodded at that and then Sir Gawain charmed Alice by asking a merchant:I'll have a bouquet of roses. Sir Lionel watched with amusement as Sir Gawain said:A bouquet of red roses from a pretty two year old dame like You. Two year old Alice blushed at the gesture And giggled sweetly before kissing Gawain's lips with drool coming from her mouth and Sir Garahald said to Sir Lionel:I'm sure Your daughter likes my brother. King Arthur invites his knights and of course the two year old girl to the Round table and as the meeting starts Sir Gawain doesn't stops complimenting Sir Lionel of how beautiful his daughter is. Sir Ruber smiles and said:Now i believe we have an intruder and who she might be?. The two years old girl said sweetly:I'm Alice i'm two years old and i'm the daughter of Sir Lionel and Lady Juliana. Ruber's eyes widened and he said: No way You can't be his daughter You're too beautiful to be his daughter You must inheritated it from Your mother can i sing You a song?. He sang a very nice song but a knight told him to close his mouth but she said:What a nice song sir Ruber was singing!. Sir Ruber felt thrilled as Sir Lionel chuckled amused while Ruber lifted the two year old girl in his arms and said:Little Alice was thrilled with my song she has a good taste in music. Sir Gawain said:I quietly agree with You Ruber and she has a good taste with men. He then winked seductively at the two year old girl who blushed madly giggling and she clapped her tiny hands with delight. Sir Lancelot said:What did I told You Percival only an hour here and Gawain is already wooing her. Alice smiled and looked at Garahald and said:Garahald can You be my best man?. Garahald asked amused:Oh are You intending to marry Alice?. She nodded and Sir Lionel folded his arms and asked:And who will You marry please?. She said shyly:Sir Gawain. Sir Gawain felt as if this was his lucky day and he asked kneeling in front of the two year old girl's stroller:Lady Alice will You marry me?. The two year old girl clapped her hands gibing her answer a big yes. The knights oooed and awwwed as Sir Lionel laughed at Gawain's priceless reaction at his daughter's answer and he said:I give my blessing. Sir Percival squealed saying:Awwwww i just want to touch her chubby cheeks when she'll grow be up she'll be a very hot lady. Sir Gawain said:Hands off my woman buddy. Alice giggled at that and slobbered on Gawain's cheek meaning that she is his only. Sir Lancelot (Stavros) ssid:How about having the wedding now?. Sir Lionel said:Agreed daughter what do You say?. Alice squealed and giggled being only two years old meaning yes and he said:Then get ready for wedding right now. In the meantime King Arthur and Queen Guinevere stood shocked because a two years old girl would get married but they looked over to the toddler girl who was cooing at them. They smiled fondly and patted the soft hair of the two year old girl. However the wedding didn't happened because Sir Lionel was killed by An evil knight called Pellinore. Alice age 2 was crying in her stroller wanting her daddy back and King Arthur and Queen Guinevere from Belle's adventures in the sword in the stone looked at her with pity. She waddled to go to her daddy and she wailed because he promised he'll live to teach her become a knight. Sir Gawain felt awful snd said:My deep Condolenses dear Alice but don't worry he's in a better place now. Alice nodded but still she couldn't accept that and Gawain placed her near sir Lionel's embrace. As Little Alice sobbed for her daddy's death King Arthur and Queen Guinevere from Belle's adventures of sword in the stone looked at each other and then back at the toddler girl their eyes filled with love and care. Luckily for all Merlin was able to heal Sir Lionel and he was strong and back to life much to the happiness of his two years old daughter who was in her stroller clapping her tiny hands. He smiled fondly looking at her and said:My brave daughter will become a great knight don't You think Gawain?. Gawain smiled and nodded before kissing the two year old girl's left hand and he said:Awww she's really happy to see You sir Lionel. Sir Lionel picked his daughter up and said:Now if You must excuse me I and my daughter will return back home. They returned back home and Kayley said:Mom listen It's Father and sister Alice. Lady Juliana smiled fondly as Kayley embraced Her young sister and her father and they lived in the farm a content life but sad news were brought that Sir Gawain died and Alice was really sad for his death but she would get over it. One day King Arthur and Queen Guinevere from Belle's adventures of sword in the stone decided to pay a visit and saw Alice age 3 learning how to walk and she walked over to her dad and mom and as well her sister and they smiled fondly. Alice also walked to them and the king picked up the squealing toddler and said:Sir Lionel it's true that Your daughter will become a beautiful lady and a great knight. He nodded and Alice touched the king's sword and asked looking at Lionel:Daddy what is that big metal thing near the king's belt?. Sir Lionel laughed at this as King Arthur pulled Excalibur and said:That's my magic sword Excalibur. Alice said:It's beautiful only a true king holds this weapon. The king smiled and the Queen said: I think that maybe a wedding between You and her will not hurt?. He smiled as Alice age 3 looked at her dad who nodded at this and she said:If my father says yes then i accept. King Arthur chuckled amused as Queen Guinevere smirked at the girl's answer and she said:Does this makes me a queen?. A nod was received and she giggled as the king handed her to sir Lionel and he promised he'll visit again. A second meeting was held nightfall in Camelot as King Arthur was beaming a great smile and Sir Percival asked:Are You thinking about Alice sire?. He nodded and said: She's the sweetest little girl i have ever seen. His knights chuckled amused at his reaction but a Gryphon came and wounded his arm stealing Lancelot's sword in the progress. Alice having learnt of it asked her parents if she can go and bring it back to which they nodded but told her to be careful. Before she could go she saw a man with light brown hair as well beard and moustache wearing blue tunic and grey pants and he had blue eyes. She recognized him instantly he was her true love the king of Camelot. She saw his wounded arm and she whimpered:Sire what happened to Your arm?. He said:A gryphon came and stole Lancelot's sword but wounded me. She told him not to worry and that she'll bring it back and he was quiete surprised at how a four year old girl would do that. |
Slendy chapter 8 . 4/30/2018 Esta espectacular. Me encanta como te esta quedando la historia por fa continuala |
itachi.naruto47 chapter 8 . 1/13/2018 Hope to read more soon. |
sakinahmohdpuzi chapter 8 . 1/10/2018 i know it has been years, but please update! this is really exciting! |
bookworm-krisi chapter 7 . 11/16/2017 So sweet...and amazing idea. I love stories where merlin is (turned) younger than the rest of the characters. please update soon. I've got like 3 or four theorie. 1. Arthur accepting Merlin's magic... bit by bit... 2. Arthur discovering something that Merlin did, to protect him, a part of his hidden past. 3. being brought to bed by arthur. and maybe 4. like he aged 3 years, because 3 more people know about his magic...now if like Gwaine and Leon discovered it...then he would age about two more years after sleeping. Something like that... |
Crystalzap chapter 8 . 5/28/2017 this is so sweet, I just wish there was more of it :D |
kendellkurrus chapter 4 . 4/9/2017 This is so frickin' cute n' fluffy! Love it! |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 4 . 3/13/2017 AWWWWW |
Daggerandcloak1513 chapter 8 . 2/23/2017 please update!1 |