ohmigod what happened

I love the way you wrote this!

this is too fabulous for words. confusing, sort of, but they ending is so fucking fantabulous. like, what even.

So strange and beautiful. Thank you

So... I don't get it, at all. But I still liked it. Especially the first bit, water being a poision that takes years and years because water life and life kills her.

But that part was the only thing that truly made sense. Couldn't even figure out if it was AU or not. I think it was cannon, though.

This is very confusing but in a good way! :D

Well... I'm speechless.

This left me amazed, dazzled.

Your writing seems poetic, beautiful.

Wonderful job.

Intense! Not as clear-cut as I was hoping for, but I think I got the gist well enough. Beautiful, regardless!

Oh, the angst.

Asdfgmfflrrrr.

This-this is so pretty and gorgeous and your way with words is heartbreaking. In a good way, though.

I love this. So much. Amazing job. /hearts.

I don't know if it's just me, but this smells vaguely like inception. Well done, though. It's absolutely beautiful.

The way you write SasukeSakura is just so beautiful. It feels like waking up from a dream that I barely remember. There's a quiet kind of desolation, and it's very poignant.

Creepy and beautifully morbid. How do you come up with these stories, seriously. You. Are. Awesome.

hahaha

its not a "duh" for me

I don't really understand it

I like Sakura's words though especially after Sasuke panics when he thinks Sakura took poison

I don't know how much of it was genjutsu

SO. This flew by me, really. I am THAT slow. But I tried to get people to explain it to me, so it might work out, in my head. And when it does, I will probably bawl and feel so sad. Until then, I am going to pretend I know what I'm talking about by saying I loved this and I love you and omfg, hi.