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quirkynerd chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 umm, hot. yes. more. you need to write more. I noticed you normally skip or just allude to sex in your fics, which is totally fine and doesn't take away from anything, but I just want to let you know that this rocked and you do write it well. |
jedisnow chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 DAMN THAT WAS UNBELIEVABLY HOT! SMOKING HOT! FINN IS VERY GENEROUS. |
Sex Kitten chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 Hi, I'm sex kitten. I'm 24 yrs old... I soooo want that sex... NOW! |
youknowwho chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 hot :) |
pvbgleefan chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 I'll never see my stove as the same after that! You're amazing! That was all kinds of hot! Congratulations! |
Bluesdj chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 Now I share a "new appreciation for kitchen appliances" with Finn, and it's your fault! :D |
MamaKel chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Add a refidgerator chapter! |
Review-er 925 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Holy...I just can't...there aren't even WORDS to describe this. Hot, heck yeah, Funny, yep, and you wrote the characters perfectly. I loved all of Finns thoughts, especially when Rachel was a "cockblock"...haha :) |
RockerPrincess83 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Looks like your first time was a home run. You did amazingly :) |
Politics.and.Prose chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Kenz, bb. I don't have words. (So don't betch at me for not reviewing. It's hard when my brain seeped from my head and is now leaving a stain on my couch.) This is, well, let's start with hot. H.O.T. Like, seriously. I could see every moment of it and both of them were so IN CHARACTER it was criminal. Let's move on to the in character-ness of our Finchel. Every word, every thought. From Finn thinking of "morning nookie" to Rachel telling him he needs his sustenance. Perfection. The storyline was great. I know it probably started off as a joke but what you turned it into was a well thought out and brilliant executed bit of smut that seriously caused me to bite off a fingernail without even realizing I had my thumb near my mouth. You're an amazingly talented writer and you stepping out of your comfort zone and producing this proves that you can write anything. Keep it up! |
joshsgrl chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Damn that was hot, good thing I don't have to cook anything tonight because I may not be able to look at mine the same after reading this. Once you write smut it's hard to go back, congratulations. |
childliketendencies chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 YOU WIN BB! Seriously, I'd been looking forward to seeing what you'd do about this stove thing, and this just totally blasted all the plotbunnies screwing around in my head for what I thought you might do. DAMN that was hot! I swear I almost died laughing at the comically-grown produce! I swear the best bits in your stories are always the insights into his way of thinking. The whole line of "He stared at her, disbelieving. He'd just gotten her off and she was repaying him by making oatmeal? Shit, was he like defective now or something? He didn't even know what to say." That was just... sooooooooooooo Finn. (also so Rachel but nevermind that). ANd his comment about considering oatmeal as something other than bird food... LMFAO... Seriously epic, bb. You'd better get started on Fridge!sex now. |
tiltingaxis chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Stove!sex FTW! I'm sure you know that I love this already from that flailing email but seriously, this line 'When she wasn't acting as a cockblock (still not cool, by the way, Rachel) she was pretty much always getting her freak on. That was a weird way to put it, but whatever.', completely slayed me. And LMAO at comically-grown produce. So basically, I'm pretty much professing my love to you through the reviewing of this fic and bb, I'm so glad you're such a pushover when it comes to writing at our will 'cause this was made up of so much awesome and you should totally write more Finchel!smut, ghetto or otherwise. p |
AmericanGirl420 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 You've rendered me speechless. This is just...effing fantastic. Are you SURE you haven't written anything like this before? You may have found your calling ;) Please, please, please write more! I keep trying to think of a word good enough to describe this story. Hot, amazing, mind-blowing...but I think I've decided on this one-epic. Thank you! |
KikkaMuse chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 so hot! amazing! |