Reviews for Don't Cry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the hard work love the story _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't say how much I despise that brute Mouri! I know, it's not real, it's fiction, but every time that drunkard hits Conan in the anime or the manga, I want to smash his face. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Family tradition huh? Good one! |
![]() ![]() aoko -died?!- holy potatoes |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am crying this is to awesome! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Awwwww, this was an amazing story! I loved every bit of it! I especially liked when Kaito professed his love, ahahahahahaha! That part was hilarious! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this, thank you very much for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this one because it expresses the depth of love that characters can have without making it romantic. I would have liked a little bit of Hakuba, but the throw away reference to him trying to comfort Kaito was probably the best way to express their siguation and focus on Kaito and Shinichi anyway. I felt like Nakamori would have been more strongly affected by what happened to Aoko. That being said, I adored Chapter 1 and I enjoyed Chapter 2. The only one I was really iffy on was the final chapter, Chapter 5, and not because I didn't like it. There were parts of it that I really liked and parts that I wasn't as fond of. The real problem in Chapter 5 is that when Shinichi shows up on Kid's doorstep, he's described as "the boy" and the fact that he's in Shinichi's body rather than Conan's isn't really referenced until almost the end of his story. It made things... confusing. (Though Kaito slapping him made SO much more sense after realizing that he was in an adult body.) Anyway, one of my favorites! Thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Family tradition? I wonder what shinichi means When will u update? U didnt leave any author note or whatnot and u just left the readers hanging there |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pfff! I spit my tea... |
![]() ![]() ![]() AOKO DIED!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, this is adorable! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is adorable. I hate that Aoko died, but everything else is well done and I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! |