perfect! it wasn't too over the top which was brilliant!

I enjoyed it, Keep up the good work. (I would totally read more of your stories)

That was neat.

this was great , youre a very good author :)

By all means, write more. Great work on this one. Very hot.

well, well, well. It is really great seeing another author join the Chuck fanfic community. Welcome!

As for the story, that was really well done. I don't read many M-rated fics. For me, I don't need to read graphic descriptions. We all know what happens, so I don't need it spelled out for me. When I read an M-rated fic, I prefer it to be more about the emotions and the intimacy powering the act rather than the act itself.

What I liked about your story, though, is that it kept it tasteful. You didn't need to go into graphic descriptions and left a large amount of it to the imagination, which was a good thing. This story was about Chuck and Sarah and the love they feel for each other. This was about the emotions they felt, and the emotions were extremely powerful. Fantastic job!

As for being frustrated that we didn't get this in the actual episode. I get you there, trust me, I do. But, then again, this is a primetime show on network broadcast television, there is only so much they can show.

Anyways, fantastic job and I would definitely like to see more from you.

until next time,

coreymon77

WOW, I love love loved this! I enjoyed reading this and thought you did an amazing job of making it tasteful. I loved where chuck asked to seduce sarah, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

I liked how you wrote this, you still left a lot to the imagination. Please share you other ideas. Welcome to the fandom

Nice story, thought you could have done a little more with Roan's comment.

It was so sweet. :))

I sincerely hope you decide to continue. :)

See you around and Happy Holidays!

Beautiful and romantic.

I've spent the majority of my fanfiction time the past couple years in the Bones fandom, too. I just started watching Chuck a couple months ago, so I've started venturing over here every once in a while since I'm not anything even close to a Booth & Brennan shipper anymore, and it just seems like non-B&B shippers don't really have a place in that fandom.

I really liked this story! I was just thinking the other day about how Chuck & Sarah have never really had, like, a sex scene. I mean, I love the way the show is dealing with and showing us their relationship, and it isn't totally necessary, but for a show that puts their leading lady in lingerie nearly every week, it is a little odd! I'd definitely be interested in seeing more Chuck stories from you if you want another break from Bones-land :)

Great story! Cannot wait to see more from you!

Great story...look forward to more from you.

Love it...

I'd love to see what other ideas you've got. Its always nice to have good writers in chuckland