awesome

for some reason I took a break in the middle of the story and now that I got back to it I binged it like it was crack! this story is freaking amazing! this will now and forever be THE story of the silmil and the fall of the moon empire

okey have to wright a mid story, maybe comment more then review, gawed I fn hate that "Prince" douche of a dickbag.
this story is amazing u write so so very well and have an amazing way if building world, scenery, voice of character and all this plus intriguing plot!

I love this story! ,

Hi, I've read this fanfic and it's really DELICIOUS, it's beautiful, descriptive, intense, consistent, fun and very very good. Congratulations ! I look forward to the second part. Greetings.

I'm not positive how I've managed to not read this in the last six years, but now I've found it I am really enjoying this story.

The way you write combat is especially good. I can picture the fights in my head, which is the acid test, the styles are true to the characters and the battles are realistically efficient, well-matched and soberingly brutal.

Also, I love your portrayal of the Princess Serenity as she forges her connections with her senshi. What has always deterred me from trying SilMil is trying to work out how they all finally reach common ground and how Serenity would bring them together. You've demonstrated that Serenity just being Serenity - excitable, dorky and able to see the best in people - bridges the gaps between them.

I hope you write more for Sailor Moon, and for these pairings. Thank you.

Oh please tell me you do have a sequel! This story was great and raw and just awesome!

I love this story!

This was a *magnificently* written fic! The development of the relationships between the Senshi as well as between the Senshi and Serenity - and how they affected each other - was marvellous if rather painful to read. Rei and Minako's relationship was wonderfully portrayed too! I thought it very realistic that you did actually show how that impacted on their ability to protect Serenity, so I could appreciate Luna and Artemis' concern as being valid despite wanting them to be able to be happy together. Ami and Makoto also provided a nice balance, being rather less angsty than Rei and Minako.

The ever-present lurking awareness of what happens at the end also gave a beautifully poignant twist to the tale. I've read quite a bit of SilMil stuff, but I think you really made best the best use of that foreshadowing. It was particularly tragic how the Senshi would rush around trying to help on other planets, and would seem to have a little bit of success and return relatively safely, but you know that all their efforts are ultimately in vain...

All in all, great job! You should be proud of yourself!

You made me ship Rei/Minako! I blame you for this. So much blame.

Got to admit I stayed up way to late on way to many occasions reading this one but it was worth it. Loved the story and the epilogue made up for the ridiculously sad end. Thanks for sharing.

Nice

my god. i didn't even let go of my phone coz of this! i luv it this finale made me cry...and there were times that i really wanted to kick luna and artemis!...and hey, i was wondering, what happened to minako after she left serenity with a died rei at the end?...and also, i'm if minako would still be angry at serenety on their present life...(excuse my grammars:) )...

Such a great story! I couldn't put my phone down! :)

LOVE, love, love this story, is one of my all time favorites.