Like Lucy said about Desmond's first leap of Faith. "That was awesome!" I love it! :)

Awww. I loved it. There aren't enough Desmond/Lucy pairings. I mean, she is a sleeper agent and everything! Why does no one see the potential in the storyline.
I loved yours. It's well written and I was smiling through the whole thing (a sign that I loved it). You are a great writer. Please do more of these! :) xoxo

I agree that there are NOT enough people who write about this pairing. Especially since they never actually do anything romantic, so we are left with only our imaginations. Half the fictions of this pairing are just AWFUL anyway. Ugh.

Anyway... this story is AMAZING. I absolutely LOVE your writing style and your characterization of these two. It's so spot on. I love the description of Desmond after he jumps, brushing the hay off, and looking casual about it since he's experienced jumps like that through his ancestors. I don't know what it is about your dialogue, but it's just fantastic, even though it's so simple. I think that it's just so in character that you could put them in the stupidest situation imaginable, but your characterization would make it worth reading.

But I'm rambling. Thanks for posting this!

This is FAR from nonsense... The fic base is way disappointing. Too much slash bullshit, especially Desmond and Shaun.

fantastic! looks like you need to do more work in the AC world! lovely and touching without being overdone with sap; you have a very good touch for emotion.

This story is amazing! I feel like it fits perfectly with the whole maybe maybe-not Desmond/Lucy thing. definitly should somehow come out in the actually game. keep writing!

Really good, I've always loved the little interactions in between Lucy and Desmond. Bit short though, could've expanded on the concept.

Awesome story! I'm also one of the few Lucy/Desmond fans around here, and I really enjoyed your story. That moment made me feel so happy for Desmond because Lucy was all, "SH*TYOU'."

... Well, not quite that, but close enough. xD

Anyway, I was wondering if I could add your story to my community? I'd be very honored. Thanks!

- Boxxie