A fantastic story from beginning to end. Every chapter was fantastic and you really kept in spirit of the show. The characters were great and the OCs were very interesting and unique. The fight scenes were well written and the humor was top notch.

Great job!

God, that scene still kills me even years after first watching it. I am literally crying. 10/10

Alright that was pretty hilarious. Poor Nia, she just wants to get with Kamina who just doesn't see her that way XD

This is pretty exciting, in a "I'm fascinated by Nia taking Simon's place" kind of way.

Man, did I love this

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Excellent story. Very interesting. You did an excellent job. There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that there were few problems with the story. I'm sad to hear you decided to stop here. I really wanted to see your take on the fight against the Antispirals. That's definitely the biggest problem I have with the ending. I'm sure many of the other readers would agree. I've been reading this since the beginning, and it was definitely one of my favorites. You took an interesting concept, and then took it in an entirely new direction that diverges from the original story. I was a bit skeptical of this new direction at first, but I ended up loving it. Thank you so much for writing this for as long as you did. I hope you continue writing in the future, and if so, I'll be sure to read them.

I can honestly say I'm very impressed. This was well thought out and had me gripped when I began reading this a few years ago all the way up to the end. Everything felt like it fit, the new material was woven in almost seamlessly and fit both the tone of this story and the canon material. I also have to admire the ambition this and your notes for a hypothetical Season 1.5 & 2 exhibited. This is the definition of an epic, in the classical sense.

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Nicely done. Simply beautiful.

They won the battle but not the war. Still a good ending all and all. We know where it leads, we watched the series.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Well, at least you thought a lot of how you wanted it to end. That's all that counts.

... Bye.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

This has been enjoyable, but the only thing I have beef with is that Nia asking the AS to stop and they did. I don't agree with that, but that's your story

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Yeah, time to kick it up a notch!

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'