Awe, a nice balance or lovely and loving moments. Nice, a little late to the party, but still enjoyable

Beautifully written. I like your change in the timeline.

very sexy and beautiful.

If only the powers that be of Guiding Light and its parent company and ABC had done this chapter as an episode...then the ratings would have soared and OTALIA would still be on tv. thank you for the fantastic chapter...loved it and wished there was more. Lisa

thank you! the story was so well written. that was the first otalia story that i've read and i think i hit the jackpot. i look forward to reading more of your stories

great story i loved it. it was wonderful to read. i hope there will be more stories with this pair soon. again great story