Reviews for Hollow Souls
phantomwolfblue chapter 6 . 5/20/2017
I really like this story can't wait to see what happens next.
Miu-nia chapter 6 . 8/25/2016
Que tierno XD
Pobre anzu tantas cosas y ella solo buscaba olvidar

Me encanto tu fic
Aruna Rammy chapter 6 . 4/26/2016
Loved this story. It was amazing. Please continue it. Would like to see both yami and anzu form a deep relationship.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2015
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
Cindy M 19 chapter 6 . 7/22/2015
I can't wait to read more... I cried a little while reading the story, so I can say I love it
LadyRaider92 chapter 6 . 12/23/2014
This story is getting really good. I like the idea of having Yami and Joey as cops. It's an interesting change. I hope you can continue the story soon or whenever you get inspired to. I like to know what will happen next and when Anzu will tell Yami about her past.
LadyRaider92 chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Oh I wonder what is Roinin's excuse for brwaking another promise... oh wait he is a self-center jerk who cares for no one but himself.. Really, 2 weeks and that is all he has to say. She should just divorce him and leave him.
The story is good (other than what happened here) hope it gets better.
LadyRaider92 chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Workaholic or not, being a cop or not Roinin needs a reality check. And whatever he is hiding will eventually come out.
Jossy chapter 6 . 2/16/2013
Awesome I love this story! :)
guardian of the aura Aurasoul chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
Continue and hurry I'm getting so excited about this story
axalover11 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
WHEN ARE THEY GONNA KISS?
Sakurayamuni chapter 6 . 2/24/2012
please please please update soon! XD
Atem's Sister Atea chapter 6 . 2/24/2012
Dang! ! An update after just one day? AWESOME! !

Good grief, how does Tea put up with working around those perverted creeps? If it were me, I'd get the heck out of and find another job regardless of how long it took...

*sighs* Here we go again. Tea's still shutting Yami out just because he's a cop. Aye-yah...

Okay, even I have to admit, Yami went a little too far there...

That creep seems a little TOO cocky if you ask me. I'm willing to bet my entire collection of "Kingdom Hearts" games that he's involved in the recent cyanide poisoning of those women...

Please Tea, the guy's a total scumbag! I wouldn't put it past him to commit murder if it suited his purposes...

I KNEW IT! ! ! ! I KNEW it was him! ! And now he's killed someone else to cover his trail! ! THAT BASTARD! ! That just leaves one question: why did he kill all those women...?

I thought it was four deceased women...

So all the victims were working as waitresses at Nakashima's club? Oh man, they must've overheard Nakashima during his "meetings" and were caught. Then that creep had them killed to save his own skin! ! And now Tea's about to share their fate! ! ! YAMI! ! ! Get your ass back up there! ! Tea needs help! !

*sighs in relief* Just in time...

You've got to be kidding me. Even now, when Yami has just saved her life, Tea STILL thinks that all cops are bastards? ! Tea, I understand that that jerk of an ex-husband hurt you and caused your son's death, but that doesn't mean that all officer of the law are like him! !

Yami made the right choice. If he had killed Nakashima, even though he basically deserves it after all the crap he's pulled, it would've made him like him...

At least that creep's going to get his time for everything he's done...

*smiles* At least now Tea's willing to at least get to know Yami before judging him. It's a start. I get the feeling that she won't regret this decision anytime soon...

EXCELLENT CHAPTER GIRL! ! I can't wait for the next one! ! Good luck with that and with your other stories! !

~Stay true to your heart~
fantasia-49 chapter 6 . 2/24/2012
oh excellent chapter and yes the vilain is arrested!
Atem's Sister Atea chapter 5 . 2/23/2012
Oh man. Poor Tea. She still misses Syia...

I still can't help but wonder why that jerk Ronin kept putting his job before his family, and why he disappeared for two whole weeks when Syia died. I still say he was heating on Tea...

*snorts* This is, what, the third time Yami & Tea have run into each other by sheer coincidence? *giggles* Me thinks that the universe is trying to pull them together...

Now if only Tea would be stop being so defensive around him. For goodness sake Tea, I know you've been hurt by a cop in the past, but that doesn't mean you should judge Yami before you really get to know him just because he's a detective. He's not Ronin!

Looks like Yami starting to put the pieces together. Wonder how long it'll take before he gets a basic rundown of what happened to make Tea hate cops so much...

*groans* That bastard really does have a knack for showing up at the worst times, doesn't he?

Oh for God's sake, when is he going to get it through that bronze-pleated skull of his that Grandpa Mutou's shop isn't for sale? ! Heck, maybe he should go back to preschool where they teach kids the meaning of the word "no". Or better yet, get a restraining order for his ass...

Kentaro WANTS to set Yami off? ! Is he CRAZY? ! Oh boy, hope he doesn't. If he does... well, he better have his will written out by the time that happens...

Hmmm, looks like Yami's starting to put a few cracks into that brick wall Tea's erected around herself. Very small cracks, I admit it, but it's a start...

Heh-heh. Looks like Mr. Mutou did a PRETTY good job of turning down that jerk flat. Maybe now that sleaze will think twice about waltzing into the shop like he already owns the place anytime soon...

I just hope he doesn't resort to anything... drastic if you know what I mean...

Hold up, that pin Kentaro's wearing. It has the same dragon design as that ring that was found near the murder victim? I smell a connection...

AWESOME chapter! ! I can't wait for the next one! ! Good luck with that, and with your other stories! !
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