Good story, but disappointed. It's not anywhere close to needing the M rating.

love it!

ich habe deine geschichte, also die hier, schon oft gelesen und gerne jedesmal wieder. lg hayne

This was lovely and sweet and awesome and exactly what I needed to read today—thank you! Loved it to pieces.

God this made my day

No offence ziva but its you and mcgee that doesn't have tonys six her role in this so far is very off putting she is a self centered 2 faced bully

such a sweet and lovely story. I loved it. Thank-you for sharing your story.

Lovely story. thank you.

That was perfect! I loved every second of it.

I've read this through twice now and am just taking the time to review... my apologies. I believe I have a new favorite story. :) Bravo!

Oh god this was just to good, I loved it. I've been passing this story up for a while now, but thought I would give it a shot and I am so glad I did...This is now one of my most favorite stories ever. I love it, how they got from point A to point B. I so wish you had another chapter so that I can keep reading.

Loved this story so much. Anna

This is incredibly well-paced and well-written, and I have enjoyed it for the second time. I loved the way an almost jokey premise was actually a very sweet love story, and that that was clear from the beginning. You allowed Gibbs' feelings especially, to be seen along the way, but it was always just enough, it never jumped ahead of the story. I loved the speculations by the Team, the outings and semi-outings, the bet between Vance and SecNav. That was a fresh choice, and I got it because it reflects the fact that these two men are managers - they observe from on high, seeing more and seeing it differently. Similarly for Ducky and Jack: I loved that the old fellas just rolled with it, patient, encouraging, and wise. The hospital, the bedroom, and the birthday were very affecting. The only thing that bothers me, not about your writing, but about Tibbs, is that these two amazing guys are each so uncomfortable with the idea of their own happiness! But it is part of what makes them who/what they are, and such a great ship. I LOVED everybody coming to the courthouse. And "Forever this time." Lovely read, thank you!
Cacky

Heh. Heh. Jack is three steps ahead of everyone and the sleeping arrangement is not only convenient but comfortable. Sweet! :-)

Loved this. A clever take on Gibbs/DiNozzo romance.