I was a little dissatisfied with that added bit about Draco's mother and her views. Seeing as this was a one-shot, with no chances of you expanding on it, I found it an unnecessary deluge of information that detracted from the over all story. I think it would have been less obvious about his intentions, and a tad out of character for him

Other than that, I still thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Blessed Be

-Dani

awww Draco is sweet at the end :)

Aaw, that was adorable! You wrote Hermione and Draco's banter perfectly. Brilliant job; this is now a new Christmas Favorite of mine!

~Weaver

Hi there and merry Christmas! I must say, I really enjoyed your fic and how descriptive you are.

As for criticism, though, you've omitted the -ed suffixes of some verbs. Also, I believe you've written "Troy: Not Just A Tale From Homer" a bit too many times. It's probably on purpose, but kind of gets annoying after the 3-4th time. XD

Hope this is useful, I'd like to see more from you - I like the humour in your writing. Peace out~ XD

Ah, so sweet :)

FYI,

Flourish and Blotts is at Diagon Alley, not Hogsmeade. And "two" and "too" have quite different meanings.

That was really cute. I always like it when someone shows the inner person of the aggravative Draco.

YOu need to continue this story. Really like it.