Hey! Fantastic story - you guys did really well. It is so refreshing to see a version where Anakin comes back to the light side. Great stuff.

I love your 5 year old's predictions about EP I. Sounds good to me!

Way to go, once more, terrific job!

~Bachy A~

If that was your 1st star wars fic, then everything you write must be damn good, I could not stop until I read it straight thru. Luke turning dark is usually hard for me to read, but it just goes to show you what pain, and lies aka a certain point of view, will drive a person to do, well written. 7

This whole story was fantastic. M & GArcher have an imagination that runs wild. If George Lucas was to read this he would be think "Why didn't I think of this! It's just...incredible"

You only have to read the story to know that my review does not over exaggerate.

Please M & GArcher do not stop writting.

Great finish! A nice bittersweet ending. I really enjoyed reading your characterization of Anakin/Darth Vader. You made him very sympathetic. Thanks for your wonderful story. It was an excellent read!

Aaaw. It's so nice to see it end on this note, though I hate to see it end at all. Greg, if you read this, nice end scene! It's good to see Vader live and Luke redeemed. I had wondered what you were going to do with him. And poor Leia, suffering like that, but it's all gonna get better! Especially with Han by her side. ;) Anyhow, nice piece of work, my friends. I've enjoyed this story muchly and I do hope you'll delve back into Star Wars again if the inspiration strikes! You are very good in this genre!

Wow! Great way to end it! *sniffs* chewie died though... You had great reasons for Luke to turn to and away from the darkside... Whenever I try to write that he turns, I always mess it up... Great story!

Wow, this was absolutely fantastic. I had alot of catching up to do, but it was well worth the time. I wish they would have done this with the last movie, maybe we can write a letter to Lucas and ask him to make another one.

I liked everything about this story. I must admit that it was disturbing to see Luke turn to the darkside and for a long while I was worried Leia might get killed, but then when Vador took her to Naboo and told her the truth of all that had happened, I was relieved.

The battle with Luke and Emporer had me worried though, and poor Chewie, poor Han, but in the end it all turned out great. I like seeing the three of them together, and can immagine in this universe the New Jedi Order being started by them and the restoration of peace in the Galaxy.

Any chance you two will do another installment?

Shelby

Great ending! Loved every minute of it!

That was bloody brilliant. I had tears in my eyes about Chewie and the thought of what will Luke do next when he finds out Leia is his sister. Will he turn from the dark side or will evil triumph. What will Han do after Chewie? I guess I'm going to have to wait, but please don't make me wait to long.

Thank you both.

I don't know what to say...

Can't believe Chewbacca is gone... :(

And the battle between Anakin and Luke left me anxious for more. What in the world is Anakin going to do? How is he going to get out of this?Is it all a trick? Is he lulling Luke into a false sence of triumph and then WHAM! will Anakin get him?

Well, I'll be waiting to see...

Oh...holy cows! Dude...poor Chewie! :O And poor Ani, watching his own son behave that way and Leia...wow. Very exciting! I hope you don't hold out the next chapter too long! Excellent work. :)

No Luke don't kill your father and Palpy you time is up. you're about to get a big surprise!

aaahhh! enjoy at my leisure I did! :)

this just gets better and better... and I'm not just saying that.

I could not help but chuckle when Chewie 'flatly refused to sit any longer in Vader's company' and when poor Solo had an 'extremely difficult' time addressing Vader as ally.

I tell ya, that Luke is really getting full of himself! To think that Darth Sideous doesn't already know his thoughts (the name change thing). When DS berated Luke for trying to 'deliver news which you foolishly believe that I am not aware', I said 'Tell him! Who does he thinl he is?' LOL

Now I look forward to the impending confrontation.

So very, very good. I loved Han's reaction to Leia's coziness with Vader. I totally agree with his conclusion that somebody has to watch out for her. Hopefully Luke will wake up and discover that the Emperor is just using him. Poor deluded boy! Can't wait for the confrontation!

Very good, very in character. :) Excellent installment...love Leia struggling with Han., it's so in character. Nice little touch with Vader asking Han to protect her! More soon I hope! :D