| Reviews for Trip and Fall |
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LoonyBadger chapter 1 . 4/11/2019 Sjaokcndos Kaka hfowmd fiskxnfislsnd *fangirl flailing and screeching* |
Akanksha chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 Are u sure that u aren't a professional writer... coz I think you do write like one... awesome job and I loved the way you expressed Wolfstar over here... I vote this one for the best Wolfstar fanfic I have ever read(and when I say this believe me I've read loads...) |
ana b chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 this story is beautiful and the ending is just - wow. |
TheWalnutQueen chapter 1 . 3/14/2012 My heart just swelled for this fic. It is literally beautiful :) There's nothing else I can say, other than thank you for doing those boys justice. |
darkwoodsdreamer chapter 1 . 2/29/2012 So sweet! XD You're amazing. I love how Sirius is just like basically, "Dude I've been hitting on you for years, don't tell me you didn't notice." and then Remus "... Wha...?" lol. Please write more! Please? :) Keep up the good work and happy writing! |
Quill Scribblings chapter 1 . 2/29/2012 Aw. Sweet. Iz luvz itz! |
o Sweet Disposition o chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 Holy frig, favorite story ever right here. Amazing job with this! |
1400300149 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011 Such an adorable story. :3 Remus is so awkward. The "mouth to face incident" was... hahaha. Oh, Remus Lupin. How you amuse me. The only thing: "...as the winter months came on, and the sun began rising earlier in the mornings." ...What? I don't know, does it do that where you live? Usually where I live the days get shorter as it gets closer to winter... It might not be so there, tho. A few spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to take away from the story, so there's no real problem there. Overall a very lovely story 3 -claps- No matter how much I like angst and gore, I still do adore fluff and happy endings a lot. :D |
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 OHHH MYYY GOOOOD!Okay,um sorry about that but gooood,that was just so beautiful!I loved the little intimate moments and then all of that!Amazing! |
May Eve chapter 1 . 4/4/2011 This made me smile like a crazy fangirl. ...Oh. Right. :D |
SerynnLux chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 I loved this, it was absolutely amazing! I had to stop reading it and go to school and it bugged me all day that I didn't know how it ended! One this I did notice was a few times there were some capitalization issues, but other than that it was Spectacular! Absolutely awsome! |
Imalena chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 Such a pretty, cute and beautiful story! Thanks a lot, I loved reading it. It just makes me so happy to see them happy together. And this Remus so anxious and unconfident is just so cute. Sirius is so awesome, always being there for Remus! I can't wait to read another of your story, I just love the way you write. I hope i'll read a lot more of your stories ;-) Imalena |
dragonfly loves axel chapter 1 . 2/10/2011 awwww SO fluffy and cute and everything nice! Everything of good you can hope for a Quirk Quirk fanfiction. I would wish for some smut, but my mind can take care of it. *laughs* May say that I was delight to see a HP fanfiction by this autor. And if you follow her you MUST read this one. |
bones-angel chapter 1 . 2/1/2011 ooooooooh. very well done :D i love it. gave me tingles all over. :D |
evrdreaming chapter 1 . 1/26/2011 Ooooh my goodness- this was so GOOD! I honestly don't have much else to say. XD I will say, because I'm a grammar freak (sorry) that you have "eachother" written a couple of times, when it should be two words. Other than that there were very few glaring errors (not that I was looking for them really- I was too busy getting into the plot). Anyway, thanks for the story. ) Oh, and hopefully this won't sound creepy, but I looked at your profile, and had to laugh because your likes, dislikes, and personality sounded so much like me. Well, except the cheese thing, because I love cheese. I'm also totally rambling. Sorry about that. It's kind of late (or early, depending on how you look at it), and I do that when I'm tired. |