Reviews for Balance
random girl chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
you did your job at the end i said " Love" in a dreamy tone
SilvanaCrowe chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
I was a little confused at the beginning, but I loved the story in general!
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
A line can't hold the world up, it would snap from the strain, triangles though... Those are strong.
This is lovely.
Lazov chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
I'm not one for triangles, threesomes or anything that involves more than just one other person, but this is beautiful. The way it's written, the way it develops, the way she... you're just brilliant. That's all I have to say, really. Brilliant and splendid and thank you for writing this.
Bob Dole chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Deeeeelightful!
RomanticRose84 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Not sure if I commented when I first read this, but its hauntingly beautiful. The end of the movies left a gaping hole in my heart and fics like this help to fill it. As a writer, I wish I had written this. Amazing.
ChibiItachi-chan chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I'm almost crying. Your turns of phrase and metaphors are so poetic and spot on.
thegirlfromswedenwholovesyou chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
i really love the way you wrote hermiones pov. her thoughts and the whole thing really. i hope you keep on to write this pairing.

-åhrlin

ps sorry for my grammar. im from sweden(as you problaly noticed from my "name")
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
it werid but i could see them growing up to be a trio, ron and harry are very close, as are harry and hermoine, ron and hermonie.
starlighttauriel chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I would love to also see this in both Ron's and Harry's point of view.
Anon chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
What a beautiful story. The Golden Trio's relationship has always been one that transcends boundaries, and you depicted that perfectly here. The kissing scene plucked my heart strings a little-and oh, it was just so them.

Amazing work. Happy holidays!
Alluring Alliteration chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
... Well goddamn it! Now I've gone and fallen in love with an OT3 I didn't even know existed!
ronikims chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
i have never ever imagine the tree of them in love with each other, i cant even think about that, but you took your story to a side i never thought possible. it seems real and with logic cus they are a triangle and always will be and with what you wrote makes them even more real. i love it and i think is the only fanfic about them tree in love that i will ever like. really good job
Lalaith Yamainu chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I love this.
vikky-leigh chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I dont normally ship the trio, but this is an exception. Youv'e made it so believeable and beatuiful. The imagery is wonderful, and the similes and metaphors that you use work very well. Although my favorite line id definately "(She totally called that, is her thought, right before their kiss breaks and they look at her caught in the middle and apparently decide that she looks way too smug.)" It's funny, and in a darker context the simplist lines can become incredibly powerful. I loved it!
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