Really good story can't wait for next chapter

Awesome story so far! Great job! Please continue, and soon! Really looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks!

Lol Nate got a little excited. Please tell me you are doing more of this because it's great. My favourite line are "We don't have time to hotwire, now get on, princess" it seems so typically Nate. I also like the relationship between Nate and Lara. xD Please I want MOORREE! -

Ok I've read to chapter 2 so far and I really like what I've read. Each of you're characters have their own personalities (in some stories they meld together.) I love you're depiction of Sully. He's funny xD. you are go at describing the scene as well -

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This is so great! I am not sure if your still writing this but it was amazing.

Haha I love the part where Lara is on Drake's lap! I can imagine that in a comic strip!

Continue please! I've gotten hooked!

Ohoho! Certainly enjoyed the fighting scene here. (Its called a shooting scene but ah well) I'm looking forward for the continuation of this!

Maybe you could make the chapters longer. I sometimes feel incomplete, but they are sure well done!

Now were getting somewhere! Nice work here. Certainly like how Nathan looks at Lara croft. Portrayals are nice enough. Keep up the good work

Interesting so far. Seems well made

Great chapter! Worth the year, I guess ;) I just love these two the way you write them, they're so dynamic. Hoping the wait won't be quite so long next time.

Awesome. Glad to see another chapter. More than that, an action packed one with some banter between our two heroes. Very cool and well worth the wait.

Keep up the good work.

Wow! Nice chapter.. i really enjoyed it :D

And their wild bike ride was just awesome