| Reviews for Moon Snare |
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santa chapter 3 . 12/18/2019 Type your review update plssssssssss |
Pastel Pineapples chapter 3 . 11/5/2018 Going into this story, I told myself to prepare for the strong possibility of it being permanently discontinued, rather than on a lengthy hiatus; honestly, the reviews stating as much should have been enough to dissuade me from reading, but I suppose I’m a masochist. And because I’m a masochist who can’t help but dive head-first into brilliant -but unfortunately discontinued- stories, I find myself heartbroken that this piece will never be completed. There is only a handful of stories I would love to see completed on this site and AO3, and this is one of them. The beginning stages of plot and character development are brilliant and leave the reader in anticipation for more, as the concept is well thought out and appears to be a unique spin on the werewolf trope. Based on the set-up of Sasuke’s dark and mysterious background, as well as his brief encounters with Naruto, I have no doubts this would have continued to impress with each chapter. Already, an attraction appears to be budding between the boys as Sasuke has admitted his feelings of trust and comfort toward Naruto, despite his strange, traumatic situation, and Naruto seems drawn to -and somewhat protective of- Sasuke, despite knowing nothing about him. I would have loved to discover what role Itachi plays in Sasuke’s transformation, as well as what Sasuke finds himself drawn to on the other side of the mountain. Is it his pack? Is it something much more sinister, considering the deformed creature that just attacked him, a mixture of both, or is he simply adjusting to this new world? Naruto’s pack is just as intriguing, and it would have been beautiful to see how Sasuke’s and Naruto’s bond develops into friendship and potential romance, all while Sasuke adjusts to the customs of his new world. This story has me hooked, and I’m holding out blind hope that, someday, you will have the inspiration and desire to return to this fandom and exceptional story. Thank you for sharing your work. I’ve read your other (brilliant!) stories in the past, but I tried to steer clear of stories that had been long abandoned. Unfortunately, now that I’ve read the majority of completed sns pieces, (and somehow still haven’t satiated my fix) I’m on to the abandoned stories to see what could have been, and this one completely blew me away. Thank you again for sharing, and good luck with whatever you’re currently pursuing! |
Brenda247 chapter 3 . 8/19/2017 My my why is it always the best stories who's left incomplete ? Mystery. |
inuyashamunkey chapter 3 . 9/7/2016 i hope you continue this one day |
Sikorka chapter 3 . 4/21/2016 I know you haven't updated this story in a long time. I don't wanna get my hopes up, but I've already read it severals times in a row, and I loved it. It's hard to find something that's interesting and well written at the same time. And I want plot like that. Dammit. Why isn't there more stories like this? But the bad thing is you left it. At least never delete it like some people do. I saw you updated this profile in 2014 and uploaded something on AO3 in this year. So well. Maybe if I pray hard enough, my dreams will come true. I hate such good stories left unfinished. Don't you? If you're bored or anything and have time to write... I'll let you know that this story is worth it. If you need anything... let us know too. I have my follow so I will wait, but mostly I will read it and think how awesome this idea was. Lots of love! Come back ;) |
lonelylulaby chapter 3 . 8/16/2015 After reading your previous stories, I have become an addict and am now just combing through them slowly but surely. This was fantastic. Would those half human failures have been apart of Sasukes pack and that's why he could sense them? Why were they trying to kill Sasuke? Don't hold back Naruto, let your heat flag fly. Unless that will get you in trouble. And who is this female that's in the house? |
Fantasy Queen Archangel chapter 3 . 6/27/2015 Great storyline the way you made all the characters act please don't give up on this piece you're doing a great job please update soon! |
kaname-luvr chapter 3 . 1/1/2015 Wow, I know its been years, but I hope you get hit by inspiration and come back to writing (especially for this story). I really like how you took your reader right through Sasuke's confusion. Come back? Please? |
Lobstirrchwan chapter 3 . 12/4/2014 Ah that's it!? *cries* I totally want to know what's going on, why is Sasuke so special. Arg! Hopefully you will update this sometime... until then I'll just continue reading your other stuff... |
Blunette chapter 3 . 10/28/2014 Okay okay okay, so I'm sure that you've probably gotten like a billion of these reviews before, but now it's my turn. So -claps hands together- let's get to the point... Er, points. Point A) I don't know how active you are on Fanfiction anymore, considering I, myself, haven't really done much with it since school has started (or before, really -sheepish chuckle-), but I'm basically hoping that maybe you still have at a least a little passion for it. Why? I think you can guess why - this Fanfiction. I've read many of your stories, and while I seem to love all of them, this under appreciated fic is my ultimate favorite. It's a werewolf story, and I'm not saying that's necessarily super special, but I'm /definitely/ saying that it's one of the good ones. For one, it's from Sasuke's point of view. Many people seem to have this obsession with Naruto's POV (which I don't particularly mind, mind you), but I personally find Sasuke's point of view awesomely unique, because his thoughts and actions are different that most other characters'. For another, it's not the usual, "I bit you, so now you're, like, my mate and shit." Nah, dude, you completely switched up the plot and everything, which I'm seriously loving. Character wise, too. Naruto and Sasuke didn't just up and fall in love at first sight, and while Sasuke may have this severe like for Naruto's scent, you haven't really done much with them, yet, and are just sort of taking it one step at a time. Your character development through all your stories is really great, is what I'm trying to get at. Naruto's dad (Minato, I'm assuming, haha) isn't this happy-go-lucky character, but an almost bad character, in Sasuke's eyes. Same with everyone else - Sasuke's a skeptical person, and without anyone to trust, he's turning to Naruto, time and time again. You're already building that special bond that all us fans love to see created before shit starts going down. Point B) I know I haven't really said many compliments, but I hope that you're still kinda getting the feel that I really love this Fanfiction. Because I do. Anyway, this is the point where I try to be of assistance in order to kinda fail at tempting/baiting you back into writing this. A review every chapter? Fan art? Beta (though my grammar seems to suck, so idk how much I would really be, ahah)? You don't have to even respond to this message if you don't want to, and now that I'm rereading it, it actually sounds kinda annoying and demanding, but again - I'm trying here, okay? You don't /have/ to drop everything you're doing to suddenly re continue this story just for my (and all your other fans') sake(s), but If you just happened to be wondering whether this was even worth maybe looking back into, I'm here to assure that yes, it completely is. I mean, if you don't get around to finishing/updating this, I'll definitely be upset, but I won't be that creep summoning demons in the corner of your bedroom while you sleep or anything. I'll just- Ah, forget it, now it sounds like I don't care, but I dooooo. I really really /really/ want to know what happens next. What's up with Itachi and this mysterious wolf pack? What is Sasuke, exactly? And this dark calling/sensing power? Does it have to do with why the monster thingers appear to be after him? What pack does Sasuke actually "belong" to? Why does Naruto smell so good? (This biiiiiigest mystery of all, I'm sure) And, yeah, I know I'm just being annoying now, haha, but I'm just really in love with this fic. I wish I could show it better, I really do, but, meh, I tried. Thank you for you time, and I hope you maybe consider! |
keltieful chapter 3 . 8/12/2014 This is very cute. I hope it's finished somewhere, someday. In curiosity, how old are the boys? |
Laudi14 chapter 3 . 4/6/2014 Why did you stop updating? I really like this story it's good |
Crimson613 chapter 3 . 1/6/2014 Hi! It's me (another of your many regulars)! Just wanted to stop by and say that I love this story. I read it a while back (I have no idea when, maybe 2012?) and I was afraid that I might not like it now, so I skimmed at first (because that usually happens when I reread stuff) but then I just reread it and I think I love it even more now! I can see everything and I have so many questions! My curiosity is just killing me and I cry knowing this hasn't been updated in years, still, I know you're coming out with some new stuff (Which are great!) so I'll be waiting (in case you ever feel the urge to come back to this and many of your other unfinished works). Keep writing! (If you want to xD) |
Lzay-Niight chapter 3 . 10/20/2013 This is going somewhere. |
Hitomi uchiha24 chapter 3 . 8/9/2013 great chapter :) |