I wonder how Sasuke is going to make Naruto fall in love with him? Can't wait to find out next. If there are more chapters on the way?

O MY GOSH that was just damn
No coment yet this was one
no emotion was protrayed

There were slight misuse with some words such as in and on, along with some misplaced adjectives as well as missing commas or semi-colon or periods, but other than that, it was great! Loved how you were creative in its smuttiness and didn't hold back. I also enjoyed the hints where Sasuke somewhat stalked Naruto way before they hijacked the ship, along with the part in the lemon scene where he was concerned for him (very brilliant touch). If this was merely a rape scene, I wouldn't have read it at all (I'm a sucker for potential romance :p), although I didn't like the part where you killed everyone off (except for Naruto), I guess you won me over with the hot lemon scene. ;) This is going in my Faves

This was awesome. I love it!

You don't have a crappy writing style. I liked it. It was a good story.

WHAT THE FUCK!YOU JUST KILLED OFF THE ROOKIE NINE!

At first I was like you really are playing with Sasuke's Douche Bagginess. He was really mean at first but I glad he became nice towards the end and I love when Naruto said he needed to get laid I was laughing so hard I couldn't breath. The story was great overall and I glad I read it but I think I should cut back on these stories because my Smut-Meter has broken.

makes me wanna cry, all of em diein an stuff

This story kind of reminds me of the incident on the news couple years ago with the pirates hijacking boats with hostages either beaten or killed. Or something.

Oh yeah the Somali Pirates that were eventually killed by the US National Guards. i dont know about any rapes but that is what you would kind of expect from these hijackings.

Well...first, I just wanna say that your grammar actually isn't that bad. I may be biased at this point (I just read a fic with the most horrible grammar I've seen in a while), but I don't think I am. Before the commandeering of Kiba's ship, I didn't notice any errors at all, and even after that, I only noticed, like...I dunno, ten errors? So in the whole piece, there were only ten errors. That's really good. Also, the story wasn't that bad. Sasuke raping Naruto...well that was part of the request, as far as I can tell, so it can't be helped, but I do have to wonder why Sasuke didn't just start flirting with Naruto when they were on land...I mean, if he wanted to get into his pants that bad, then why not just sidle up to the guy (who was apparently being extremely obvious to the fact that he was an uke in need of a good seme) and start talking to him, then convince him that he'd be a good guy to have his one night stand with? I mean, seriously, Sasuke's not THAT much of a freak that he doesn't know how to do that...Well, actually, in cannon he probably is, but this is AU! Anyway, good story -

ooo..mmm..gggg... THAT WAS FUCKYNG AZZUUUMM, och det att du är svensk gör saken ännu bättre! Liksom duh! Stochol the capital of sweden ;)

Meanie you left me breathless and wanting more. Unfair love sasuke in this fic as well as whorish naruto. Side fic would be nice to dis but that selfish me wanting more great job.

amazing, absurluty amazing!(sorry can't spell) )

omgggg eeekk aaah! This was so well written.

I'm so sad that like all of them died :((( im totally faving this :D

Please continue with this stories plotline!