Inuyasha had no to what Kikyo did or what happened to her? He didn't still want the jewel?

None of this is making sense to me

Hasn't everything happened a bit fast? When did Kagome and Sesshomaru get close since they barely speak? How is Kagome getting training for her miko powers and where did this necklace come from that she gave Rin? How are the castle demons dealing with the smell of a dead body walking around in a clay shell? Why didn't Kagome tell Sango, Miroku and Shippo what happened?

Your story is beautiful. For grammar and mispelt words: use a Webster's Dictionary, and Roget's Thesaurus, not Spell-Check.
You live and you learn.

"already", not "all ready".

demon "slayer", not demon "slayor".

"taunted", not "tonted".

I tried to look up what a strapless kimono is but I was unable to find it anywhere.

I liked this story a lot. Though there were a few grammar errors I found that I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work

I love Sesshomaru's Beast!

Why are you calling the jewel a jew?

lindo, hermosísimo final.

The story is so good but it is almost painful to read at times due to all of the spelling errors. The jewel is constantly called the jew and there are words left out of sentences that would have completed them. You can make out what the author is trying to say but it might take a few time rereading it to understand it completely. It would be infinitely better if this was corrected.

The glaive is the European version of the Japanese naganata.

Hot damn! Got the Band back together to kick Naraku's ass: Sesshomaru, Kagome, Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku and Koga!