who was this strange man

Update it soon please

Update it please

not sure if I'm enjoying this so far. a martial art harry sounds interesting, but I'm not sure I like this new Chang villain and that girl OC. Who are these people? Are they your own creation or is this a crossover of some kind and they're from some other series? I'd be grateful if you'd let us know which series this crossover is

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

This is so good im very sad you died or watever. I also love the ending conversations very funny.

what stoped Harry from apparating out at the end?

there is something so wrong with the idea of martial artist Voldie...

I kind of hate how you've pretended it's a martial artist's job to protect the weak. That's a philosophy of certain styles, but that's hardly martial arts. And despite what movies you might've watched "Oriental's" as you so broadly put it were far from kind hearted peace seekers. Some were, many weren't.

Not sure if you'll ever return to writing. But this is definitely an interesting idea, and I like the setting even when non-magical born can train to be able to fight on the same level as a mage.

A couple of nitpick as a Chinese to a none Chinese speaking writer trying to portray Chinese culture and martial arts. Sifu is actually the wrong pronunciation for teacher/master. It should be 'Shifu' (which means teacher father as the Chinese ideology of a teacher being a father figure).

Also, as a Chinese speaker Shenqi Nuhai sounds wrong. As Shenqi means something more closely resemble 'wonderful' or 'wonderfully strange'. A better term to use would be Mofa which actually translate as magic (or from a literal sense, 'devil's practice') in English.

Lol, what a pile of utter ****

Well if Santa bring coal for not reviewing I'm safe. It's been so many years since I got anything truly great. Anywho, I started this once before and like so many others I somehow lost it. But now I intend to finish it. I was somewhere around Harry and Dudley facing off again after some years. Both undefeated in their respective arts. Don't know what chapter it was but I'll get there sooner or later. It's just a matter of reading.

Man, you really know how to take an interesting concept, run with it, then drop it. This story is very interesting, I especially like what you've done with Harry, Dudley, and Draco. I also noticed the Kenichi references, too bad you were ax murdered or whatever.

Please go fucking die

this is great