Reviews for Daylight
lil-kay9944 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
That was so sweet :D Very good job (:
retropanda37 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Loveliness! All the little moments added up to great insight into their relationship. I really enjoyed it :)
spcr71 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Great one shot. Would have been nice to add a second chapter that had the same days but with her thoughts. Also thought you could have taken a morning from the Shaw arc. Best description of Sarah/Yvonne ever: "visual approximation of a miracle" Thanks for the one shot.
LinShoe85 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Aww that was cute. :) I think you did a good job for your first stab at fan fiction, hope to see more.
NCISaddict77 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
cute
londonwriting chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
This was super cute. I enjoyed each scene, especially the first; I never really paused for thought about what happened between 101 and 102, but you kinda made me think about it :)

Thanks for posting!
coreymon77 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
wow, that was very well done. Very cute! A nice exploration of their relationship. I really liked it!

until next time,

coreymon77
Kelly75 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I loved this. Left me wanting more...
ne71 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Hell of a debut.

Amazingly well-written, but more than that, very soulful. Great moments - some familiar but now fleshed out, others wonderfully new. VERY well done.

Can't wait to see your second, and third...

Nick
Gladius Grim chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Great moments and ones that show the development of their relationship. And glimpse into the future :-)

Great job!
tss1950 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Aww. I mean really Awww! That was a wonderful piece of pre christmas fluff. Great job.
lucky713 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
I love this look at little moments in the past and future. Well done!
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Thanks! I liked it a lot!
Doc in Oz chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Neat-o. I loved the image at the breakfast. Not wanting to disturb the scene. Brilliant.