This was great! A. little abrupt on the ending but you tied it up nicely. The farm visit was really sweet.

A great ending. Thanks for sharing.

This story is too much like New Moon only with Jasper being Edward and New Moon was the only segment I didn't like out of the lot.

I just finished reading your story. You made the characters more down to earth in a way. In the sense of their reactions and situations feel more realistic. But at the same time, in terms of the vamps, they were more dulled down a bit and noticed scenarios that would've been evaded with their "vampire traits". They felt more underpowered than normal. Maybe that's how you wanted it though. :) great story

I really loved this story.

Loved it u are a great writer I wish it was abit longer but still was happy with the ending

Edward is a prat. A prickish, prudish prat.

Go for it Jasper!

Good, Jasper. Don't chill everybody out.

Alice. Ho.

Well, at least Carlisle isn't all, "Edward, blah, blah, blah thinks he's in love, blah, blah."

Quite. Edward's going to take care of everything.

Poor Jasper.

the human blood high.

I imagine it would be.

A little lust there? My, my.

Ah, the old run-out-of-gas trick.

ha ha ha ha ha ha

And he kissed her! At least he doesn't want to eat her.

Oh, let's all bow down to Prince Edward.

Fucking assbutt.

Jasper's singer?

Gee, Edward doesn’t like that the others are looking at him like he’s the ticking time bomb instead of Jasper?

Poor baby.

Bella's all a-twitter!