I like some of the memories that you created. At first I was afraid the whole story was based on the anime, unless those scene happened and didn't know. Good ending. Thanks for your work.

This was nice, if a bit weird after reading Tengen Toppa Gurren Solvernia. The only other thing I have to say is that some of the longer paragraphs could be broken up into more sentences. But other than that, it looked fine.

Not bad in summarizing the relationship between the two.

D'awwwww...

You captured the spirit of love perfectly!

MAD PROPS!

I really wish that they were together forever.

Baaaawwww.

That was so cute.

I only disliked 2 things: Forehead-boy (cause he was deseigned to be hated) and the fever.

At that point in time, medical knowledge would have been scarce. Simon's probably already overloaded schedule would not accommodate time for medical debriefing. Or I am way too overanalytical.

Generic compliments all around.