sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gart

I really think, you should have Josh do some sciency shet to make Rae a raptor, Don't ask me where I get my logic from, cause I have none, also Marron is freaking adorable

I like the story, and besides the ten or so spelling errors your work is well done. I'm glad this is my first Jurassic Park fanfic.

Hey did you happen to be on wattpad at some point? Because I've been looking for this book but it's not on there anymore

Did you happen to make this story on wattpad? Because it's similar to one on wattpad that isn't there anymore

This was the first Jurassic park fanfiction I have ever read and I have to say of all of the ones I've read this one still remains to be my favorite! It's so gripping and cute and charming hat it makes me want to return to read this again and again! Your beautiful easy with words and gripping characters inspired me to start posting my stories as well! I absolutely love this and it has remained my favorite Jurassic park fanfic!

Oh my gosh this point line is genius I've been looking for a story with a raptor and a human romantic relationship and I couldn't find one a lot of them to either had really bad grammar or the plot line was nothing but sex there's not much I can criticize on this story all I can say is that you're doing really great work I don't know if you'll get this because it seems like you haven't been on here for a bit but I just wanted to tell you you're doing really great work I know how it feels when people tell you you're doing really crappy you should just quit and I don't think that's very fair I also know all about writer's block I just wanted to give you some of that encouragement that I think you deserved and wanted to say you're doing really great and that I love you story double brownie points just for you

Also lt stands for Lieutenant
And still love the story nice work man.

I loved it but why you have too leave us hanging well eh have fun in adulthood and uh dont die.
And just to let you know im a marine over on a aircraft carrier and yes we are all given a labtop but good luck.

What's the other account please tell me

AKA "Not a chapter III" XD

... is this beastality? ... how would that work? ... now i don't know whether to be scared of my mind or not.

going to continue reading - just wanted to stop and review, i like it so far!

I..I..I LUV DIS! ._.(XXXXXXDDDDDD) yeah more! MORE!

ch 37

ow that sucks but ok .

And Maroon is not a fucken dinner or food , he is a thinking person no mater of what kind . And should better to save them both I hope with all parts of the body Whole , without any lost parts of the body even fingers .

ch 30

And also she needs a active coal when she is poisoned , and Rae should know rule number one of te survival " never leave your gaurd , be ready for any kind of danger and defend . Or else , like this wioukld happen .