Am enjoying your story. It reads like an actual "Equalizer" episode. McCall's the main character as he should be. You've nailed Mickey's and Robert's dialogue...sounds just like them!

An nice, optimistic ending...Just like the episodes!

Well done! I enjoyed this quick, fun read! Short on action, but excellent work on getting the characters' voices!

I might have liked more detail on the action. Some brawling. Some shooting...But, the character work was very good. I cared about Nicole...I can forgive the lack of action...

I will R&R with pleasure...

Good chapter. Quick. Efficient. Again, I could HEAR McCall and Mickey's voices, your writing «sounds» like them. Well done.

Good pace. Suspense.

More description on McCall...Well done, from Nicole's POV...

Quick and efficient introduction of McCall and Kostmayer.

You captured the characters well...

Nice prologue, worthy of the old shows.

Good descriptions, nice intro to the "client"...

Intrigued so far, will keep reading...

Very good piece of work! Plot works, characterization fits canon and the pace was excellent for an episode adaption. I grade it an A. Excellent first outing!

I enjoyed this very much! And I look forward to the sequel! :D

I'm so glad you updated! It's a very nice ending. I look forward to your sequel (maybe with Control in it? LOL).

Good chapter. I liked learning more about Nicole.

I love Mickey. He's really very sweet underneath it all.

I'm really enjoying this.

Also, I have an Equalizer community at Dreamwidth. I started it as a place to collect my thoughts and condense information about the show and characters, but you're welcome to visit and play in the sandbox, as it were, if you like.



In case the link doesn't show in comments: .org

Hello- I just came across your story- can't wait to see where it goes.

You certainly have captured the feel of the characters and texture of the NYC streets.

Please continue this soon - thanks. carol

Oh, I will definitely keep reading! Your story is very intriguing, even if it doesn't feature Control. :)

I love The Equalizer, having grown up on it as well. Your story has a great start to it, and I hope you continue (and I really hope Control shows up!).