I’m crying The end is soo sad!

no offence but, i feel like Charlotte is a bit emotional

I spy with my little eye little bit of The Mortal Instruments.. I LOVE THAT SERIES AND NARNIA AND SO MUCH MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE 3 Amazing story, by the way, I love it x

OMFG YOU USED THE CHARACTERS FROM THE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS AS HER FRIENDS I LOVE IT

Can you mak her less of a bitch? Is that so rucking hard?

That was an unexpected ending :( I'm kind of sad because the marriage felt like a summer fling! Good writing though!

I read this fic for the first time two years ago when I was in seventh grade, and I remember going to school and telling my friend, "Oh my gosh I read the awesomest Narnia fanfic yesterday!" After I read this, I wanted to write something just as heart-breaking, dramatic, and beautiful; and that was when I wrote my first fanfiction, which was absolutely awful but that's okay because I'd like to think that I improved, and I drew so much inspiration from this story of Charlotte, Edmund, and Will. I just wanted you to know because well...you're awesome, and even though I don't know you personally or anything I think it's important to tell someone when they've influenced you so much.
I wish you all the best!
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This book was amazing! I'm an author myself and I always get writers block. I admire that your always able to get out of it and I wish this book didn't end so quickly. I was deeply engrossed and I hope you continue to write. I also liked how you tied this in with he actual story. Your characters were very unique too! Keep writing fellow author!

Looks really good..

MORTAL INSTRUMENTS

Poor charlette but what happened to damain?

Will is back? How'd he even get there that is so weird

ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER !

A bit cheesy but still awesomeness

Grrrrrrrrrr CLIFFHANGER AGAIN :(