...Aaaand now I'm crying.

absolutely beautiful. you have a right to be proud.

sweet

This was amazing!

But so sad.

I love it. It was sad, but it was also sweet at the same time. It really does make me want to cry because of how sad and sweet it is. And this is how I see them after death. If you dont want to read then just skip to the bottom.

I see them together watching everything, watching over Harry and waiting to see what happens next. Then on the daythat Harry dies they will welcome him with open arms. He will be with his family again and then he will wait for the days ahead when his friends and family come to join him up with his entire family. Family and friends even through the end. They will always be together, no matter what happens. You cant seperate friends and family, unless you hate eachother of course. James, Remus, and Serious have all long since forgiven Peter and they are all hanging out again. This is my vision.

Sorry if you didnt want to read it or if you thought it was stupid. If you skipped the above part then that is ok with me, I dont care. I really liked the story, thank you for writing it.

Loved this one.

Especially when you described how Remus felt about his friends' deaths, when he realised the silence wasn't good enough, that silence was impossible to bear.

I was... amazed.

you're a really good writer

I'm an Italian girl and I write stories on the italian version of this website.

I speak English quite well - or that's what my teacher thinks - and I'd like to translate some of your stories.

Please let me know by sending me a personal message.

So sad :( I liked James' paragraph best, it was the thing about Sirius fighting the blame really that made menlikebit best

I enjoyed it immensely. Remus' was certainly my favorite. peter's was creepy, but very realistic. I could just imagine him...

This was amazing and it made me cry. Thank you for writing this.

This was an amazing piece of writing. It really brought tears to my eyes. For someone who have never really done a non himor story, you are amazing at it. I loved this SO much, it was amazing.

This was really sweet :)

Awww. That was awesome.