Reviews for Lily Potter's Revival
ME chapter 29 . 5/10
so you just abandoned this story...?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/23
Nice, cute story so far! Love the bit that said Dumbledores handwritings worse than a Muggle Doctor! XD You've got a great sense of humour!
Luminous-Wave chapter 4 . 2/9
This is a really nice story. It doesn't flow though, it just sounds off. Maybe try to describe scenes and events better with noun groups.
Yaw613 chapter 29 . 5/13/2019
Please write the next chapter already. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Thank you very much.
pebble chapter 29 . 10/22/2018
love it, always looking for one where james never comes back as well.
Magi Mari chapter 5 . 10/9/2018
this is really good i hope you continue this
lennymosca4 chapter 4 . 8/8/2018
The story has potential promise
Guest chapter 28 . 8/4/2018
GANDALF?!
Guest chapter 16 . 8/4/2018
Yas Harry and Draco scene wa perfect
Guest chapter 13 . 8/4/2018
I know how to fix him. You have Remus take charge and give Jason a nerve tonic.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/4/2018
Soooooooo good love Sirius he is like a whiney kindergartner :3
Guest chapter 14 . 7/13/2018
Can you put more of Snape into this
pottersdaughter8 chapter 18 . 8/28/2017
book 1 x
PLS DO MORE123 chapter 29 . 9/30/2016
PLS COULD YOU KEEP GOING MOVE IT I LOOOVE IT
ginnyfredweasley chapter 29 . 9/24/2016
hi i loooove this! it is absolutely amazing! please, i beg you to keep going
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