Great job! I sympathise with Elladan - toothaches are the WORST!

aw

poor elladan!

Funny. Luckily, I never had to take out my wisdom teeth since they grew it straight. Poor Elladan and Elrohir.

Very funny! I always love coming across sweet, fluffy stories of this sort that are good for a few laughs. Although I can now look back at the days of wisdom teeth as a memory, I do sympathize with Elladan and his mortal teeth. I love the interaction between the twins - they act so much like brothers.

Ha, the thought of Estel teething is amusing - I always forget he was an infant at one time - and the part about who inherited what elven qualities was amusing.

True, it would be difficult for elven teeth to last so long - unless they have really strong teeth.

I would suggest adding a break before Erestor pulls Elladan's teeth. The way it is now was a bit confusing. They were talking and then all of a sudden Erestor has pulled all his teeth. It would just be nice to know time passed.

Short and funny. The banter back and forth between the twins was believable and amusing, and I enjoyed reading this one-shot. Well done. Keep on writing!

-Sauron Gorthaur

Haha xD funny :P

Poor Elladan! Love it!

Of my gosh that was hilarious, I could not stop laughing!

Oh, poor guy. I take delight in his misfortunes.

Nothing like a bit of Rivendell fluff in the evening. D This was very amusing! Poor Elladan. Although by the looks of things, neither of the twins is going to be partaking in the night's revelry. :P

Ara