Loved it. It was about time that Harry grew a set. He's an alpha male for God sake and too often in Harry and Ruth fiction is shown to be indecisive, shy and reluctant to push Ruth. I really enjoyed the way you write and the plot itself. Good work.

Too fantastic. Thanks!

I forgot to mention how beautiful it was when Harry explained how he felt in her presence. It was stunning. It was wonderful. It was enough to momentarily make me forget this stupid arsing coursework I'm supposed to be stupid arsing doing.

Thank you.

YAY

""That's the problem with real life, it keeps getting in the way,""

- Doesn't it? :(

You're ability to write at speed puts us all to shame! Thank you so much for this :) It's a wonderful Christmas present x

Oo, this is lovely. I enjoyed the whole thing. Lots of amusing moments interspersed with the odd moment of angst. Great stuff. :D

xx

"Right," he said wanting to make an issue of it, wanting to make a total, all assuming, all consuming issue of it.

Great line! Lovely snow!fic. Thank you for posting.

Oh just gorgeous!

*grins* Yep that kept me smiling! In fact, I can't stop smiling! GORGEOUS! LOVED IT!

However, it took me about 10 mins to get past this line:

Harry's first instinct was to kill him.

Because I was laughing too much!

BRILLIANT! I just hope the snow never stops!

xxxx

SQUEEEEE so cute! Epilogue please :) xx

Whoa, a whole story has appeared, very quickly. Really love your writing which is so easy to read.

Your Harry and Ruth are a lot more to the point about things, esp Harry, and the simplicity and clarity is great. The sparse use of words is just right for what happens, and this chapter is a great example of that, both in dialogue and description, particularly:

Nothing was said. He stared. She avoided. Silence.

Thanks!

Perfect fluff! We just need that epilogue, please?

Oh I'm so happy and squeeful! Can't wait for the epilogue :)

xx

Aww scrummy!