Reviews for A Crack in the Looking Glass
Evilkat23 chapter 26 . 7/2
It took me two days to reread this whole fic (I was there when it was first written in 2010 it was one of the first I've read) and holy crap! This fic is awesome! Like I can imagine everything that happens and the fact that a second Italy came in just made my heart leap! (I was honestly it was going to end with Italy murdering Germany and it being a weird unending loop deal, I'm glad I'm wrong.) Holy shit the pairings. Talk about a love...square... heptagon? Francis likes Arthur, Arthur likes Alfred, but Mattie likes Alfred and Russia has feelings for Mattie? Holy crap! I'm glad I came back to it, and was able to find it again! Seriously one of the best out there!
iiShizuki chapter 1 . 5/1
Re reading this the second time! I love this story so muuch~!
Guest chapter 22 . 5/20/2018
Too many main characters got killed off...
Guest chapter 16 . 5/20/2018
Who is the fricken queen you keep on mentioning damn it?!
Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2018
I should make a relationship chart. Lol
Guest chapter 4 . 5/20/2018
I saw this coming...America is always the ‘hero’ after all
Inky-Paws chapter 26 . 10/15/2017
AHHHH THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY! AND YET ANOTHER CONCERNING ENDING HINTING AT A SEQUEL THAT ALREADY EXISTS AND I AM DEFINITELY GOING TO READ AFTER I FINISH STUDYING FOR FINALS, SPEAKING OF WHICH, DID I MENTION THAT I HAVE TO STUDY FOR? BUT GREAT STORY! ROUND OF APPLAUSE! *CLAPS INCESSANTLY* YAYYYYY! WHY THE FUCK AM I YELLING? i'll stop now but this was fuckin' amazing and inky out
Agent Fabulous chapter 28 . 10/1/2017
THIS WAS SO AMAZING OMG THE PLOT WAS GREAT
phanisreal0123 chapter 14 . 6/22/2017
AHHHHH MISCONCEPTIONS
Akina1621 chapter 26 . 1/1/2017
I LOVE THIS STORY. FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK. You had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. All your plot twists are BEAUTIFUL. There were SO MANY PLOT TWISTS, and yet it wasn't overdone. The plot twists fell snugly in place and IT WASN'T OVERDONE like fahhhhk dude! Also, I dunno if this is just because of the types of fanfics I've been, but Alfred is beautifully written. He's a serious Alfred, not oblivious. Ugh, I can't tell you how much of a relief it was that you had Alfred be this character. Also, I think you may just have planted to seed of USxParallelUS in my head. Which is not good. Anyway, I LOVE the action in this story. The action-packed scenes definitely held my attention because I was afraid to miss something. The romance was definitely wrenching. Thankfully, not TOO ANGSTY, but "regretful" is definitely the way to describe it. The twists and turns was cruel yet invigorating, and also hooking. And just the right amount of fucking steamy too. Shit, I really can't get USxParallelUS out of my head. And it wasn't even anything serious. The plot was AMAZING. There were two important parts to it: the normal take-down-Russia, and then the twisty romances. Both were outstanding. Seriously. I love your creativity. It's taking all my willpower to review and not just storm off to the sequel. Everything was beautiful. My only critiques would be spellcheck (not too many mistakes, but they were noticable). And well, GerIta kind of faded away into the background, but well, I'm not complaining. Although I dunno if people who were looking for GerIta would say the same. Anyway, GREAT STORY. DEFINITELY FOLLOWING YOU LIKE A HAWK FROM NOW ON. (No pressure XD XP)
Akina1621 chapter 16 . 1/1/2017
I love how although Germany got all the attention for the first few chapters of the story, America gets all the action. XD
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2016
Omg yaaaaaaaassss... I love evil assassin Italy brothers!
Proud Pancake of Prussia chapter 23 . 10/12/2016
you don't know how much fucking anexity this story is giving me.
Proud Pancake of Prussia chapter 15 . 10/12/2016
Wow. America is an idiot
Proud Pancake of Prussia chapter 11 . 10/12/2016
Holy fuck. I did not see that coming chapter a verditian revaluation. close enough
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