This is SO brilliant. Well done!

I love the storyline :D I like how you used the prompts-very creative and seeing that the prompts aren't that easy, great job!

I love your presentation! The repeating words like hurtshurtshurts and laughslaughslaughs has an effect on the word being continuously shown to create a deeper impact. The way you wrote Dracoate is vivid and dark, like his want to kill. The words in the brackets, are they for explanation? It's a great wasy to write a story. And the use of present tense and "he" all the way is quite new to me but I like it a loot. I lie your descriptions and emotional words. The hatred was very well depicted.

Dark. Demented. I love it! ] I loved how you wrote the dispair. The torture. The Misery. Really great story Azzie! I really enjoyed reading it! XD

This is so very, very, very absolutley BRILLIANTLY...brilliant. I'm sorry, I kind of ran out of adjectives to describe how much I ADORE this piece. So. Being. Favourited. As are you, Azzie.

Angst - oh, yes. Love it. Very powerful piece of writing. It has a real sense of hopeless anger and desperation as Barty struggles to keep more or less... or less sane. The way he's fighting to keep on the last vestiges of his strength, mental and physical, it's just so chilling because one realises he's fighting a losing battle. I especially liked the beginning, that strange interaction, if you could call it that, with the Dementors: ""I lived once!" he suddenly shrieks, rebelling against the crawling feelings of fear and helplessness threatening to take over." Gosh, that place just gave me the creeps.

Lovely piece. I really enjoyed reading this.

Oh, wow.

This is AMAZING! It was beautifully written, so real and... perfect X)

I felt cold and slightly fearful reading it, like I was there and I was him.

The way he shrieks out things that are vague and like he's lost it is so perfect and... yeah, I loved it _

*favourites*

I never really liked Barty SR for what he did to his wife. I could really feel the hatred Barty Jr. had for his father in your description.

Oh. My. Goodness. This is so creepy and dark and... I really don't even have the words to describe this. It's incredibly well-written; there isn't one single word I could change to improve this. I love how you don't tell us exactly who it is at the beginning of the fic, but start to realise that it's Barty Jr. as the story unfolds. I would have never, never, never thought of writing this scene; the whole premise is absolutely brilliant... and seriously, your writing is just amazing. Well done, and I feel way better about my piece being late... Next to this, it wouldn't have mattered.

Oooh, this is so creepy! I love the paragraph where Barty sees his mother.

Très très bon comme toujours (la fleme de faire en anglais xD )

Hrrrmmmm... A good job, overall Ink. One major problem though: you screwed the quote. It's in quotations, and was meant to be said... that aside, you did a pretty good job. _

wonderful as always!

keep up the great work :D