that is good. update soon please.

Poor Sev, and Sir, they don't realize how much they love each other.

I am really glad you updated it and would be happy to look over you chapters and fix them up for you. I noticed you spelled Weasley as Weasly every time you wrote it. Still this chapter is more coherent than the others, and it is really really cute. I loved the nightmare scene.

i like it.. you should right more... js..

Brilliant story so far I hope you update again soon.

It's PARSLETOUNGUE not Possle Tongue!

ahh so cute keep updating please

hahah hilarious update soon!

I am seriously loving Dumbledore right now! I like how he tricked them both so now everything they do will make it seem like the other likes them. It's such a smart way to tricking them into liking the other. Especially since they won't ask each other straight out because of their many pride. *snickers* Hahahaha!

This was good and I think having to think about the bomb Albus dropped on them about each other, oocness is expected.

I thing you should check the spelling of parceltongue [i think it one word and isn't spelled possle, im certain it has an r in it]

The scene with the motorbike was perfect, their reactionns seemed spot on cause when it come down to it petty rivalry be damned when you terrified and Sirius really isnt an ass

Pretty interesting although two months to translate the whole book sounds a bit small of time _

That was cute! I want to know what the sorting hat said though! Update soon pls!

Okay so I have a few things to say

1) you really should make sure you double or triple check you spelling and grammar. I found many mistakes that cannot be overlooked.

2) the way you write the thoughts really confused me. I couldn't tell who was thinking so I had to go back and check which was quite annoying.

3) some of you characters, mostly Snape and Sirius, seemed very OOC. I don't know if that was on purpose or not but I thought you might want to know that.

4) sometimes when reading I got confused in what was going on

5) a solution for the issues stated above would be a beta, I don't knownif that would help or nt but it's just something to think about...

Sorry if that was a little harsh but im just trying to help, also these r just suggestions, you don't have to do any of this.

I really do enjoy this story, however, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

awesome UPDATE SOON!

ahhahah ! your Dumbeldor is amazing!i love him already!