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AMAZING! I love this story so flipping much! Its unfortunate that there is only 4 chapters, sooooo you should update really really soon. Like super soon! The suspense will kill me if you don't update! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

I like the plot! Looking forward for more! C:

Wow, this is beautifully written! I hope you decide to continue this story someday. I just fell in love with one of your stories again 3

OMG! OMG! OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS IS SO FREAKIN AMAZING! .

You are an awesomely amazing writer I can't believe I didn't see this story sooner. U haven't updated in a long time plz cum back! Me can't wait I bout to burst waiting 4 da next chapter ！(_;)

Plz update really really very very soon (з)-

Someone sent me this link and told me I had to read this story. So I did I really really like the idea of it all! Its really nice that it actually has a plot lol Not that I don't mind those plotless Royai stories (goodness knows I've favorited 7423874382 of them) but its nice to mix it up and have a plot! I hope you update soon because I really want to know what happens :D

Oh. My. God.

You completely astounded me by your writing ability. I'm so impressed. I can't believe I didn't see this story earlier! PLEASE continue this story. I'm begging you! This is a wonderful story, and I'd love to hear all you have to offer.

This story is really good :D continue please :)

Beautifully beautifully written! I cannot stop reading for a moment! I would love for you to continue, I CRAAVVEEE for what happens next. I do love the part where Lady Evita and Riza were having their 'girl' talk, I couldn't stop laughing for a minute haha, hopefully there will be more comic relief like that, I think it will make the story much more interesting. I love it so far!

This is so good so far! I wanna know what happens next! *pouts.* The next chapter isn't up yet. Anyway, like I said, awesome story. And Twilight is overrated. I mean, if I suddenly decided to write a story about vampires and lycanthropes (I love that you know that word. No one I've talked to does, and when I asked my friend if she would be a vampire or a lycan, she thought I was asking about lichens. The stuff that grows on trees.), everybody would be like, 'woah, why are you ripping off Twilight' or somehing like that. And I have a question. Or a theory, I guess. I think Mr. lycan-ally-evil dude has a pretty big crush on Riza. Am I right? Well, regardless, please update soon please!

Write on!

~MC

But I loved the plot originality. It's not a fic with the same script that Roy is a General and Riza his eternal assistant and end. Some AU is very refreshing when the story is well done as yours. A bit more of romance would be nice, I was a little sad when you did not write about the moment of their first kiss... What they were thinking and feeling? It was very exciting when you described Roy reactions when he first saw Riza. Very well done!

Please, update soon.

Guuuu! I adore this! Can't wait to see more!

beautifully written but sad to see no updates [

Your stories are just so good and well-written. I just hope that you'll update soon! I really liked the way you write your stories and I'm really excited in this one. I'm not really a big fan of Vampire-Werewolves stories like "Imortal" (Never watched it.) but this got my attention. Please, update soon!