Wow. Just wow. This is absolutely stunning! I'm in love with this. Thanks a lot for this amazing piece of art, Author-San! Lot's of love!

C'était magnifique et vraiment vraiment mignon. Belle fin

nice job man

kya!
is so cute
i really like it

I love it but one thing bothers me it says Romance/Angst it sould be Hurt/Comfort/Romance instead cause it has a happy ending.

lovely! great style too

As much as I'd like another chapter of LuNa fluffiness ... don't. This is so awesome it can stand on its own and doesn't need a sequel, perhaps it would even destroy the impression.

It's amazing like this, and the last sentence ... I love fitting last sentence, and ohh, this is fitting like hell!

Well done!

I love your story, its really cute. I was sorta listening to a song that had to do with this kind of situation when i was reading it, kind of ironic.)

meh...might be cliche, but it works.

Thank god, this is just what I needed today. I've been down and fake-smiling all day, and now I finally have a pure smile for the day.

This went deep, but it felt really light-hearted. That's neat.

Oh, I don't think you should make it a two-shot. It will take a little bit of the magic. If you do write a wedding make it another one-shot.

I think your first first-person POV worked out really good :)

Oh, what a nice fic *_*

Hey, I liked the story, it was nice, I love drama like that, but I didn't like how you wrote Luffy. Him being a coward? Him telling her to pick him? That whole end speech of his irritated me, to be honest because I think Luffy is very unselfish.

It's too bad you didn't include Sanji's reaction too.

I hope I didn't discourage you, but that's how your story made me feel, Luffy just didn't seem like Luffy, but it was still a nice read. :)

This was sad...but happy at the end

WOOT Luffy gets the girl :D

This was a nice little one-shot. Can't wait for more to come :D