| Reviews for Ultimate Opportunist |
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Jess1186 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 That is a pairing I've never read before⦠oh, and I love it so! 'celebratory sleep' love it! Amazing, the whole fic :) |
RKOCMJHGIRL chapter 1 . 5/19/2011 AWESOME! |
IsidoraAngst chapter 1 . 3/7/2011 I really enjoyed this story. I've came to love this pairing. I loved the way the Miz is arrogant. I loved that they were brooding even though they were Champions. I'm just curious about what Randy and John Morrison was thinking when they saw them leave. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 Miz is just extreamly sexy in this fic, his conceited-ness is a turn on for me lol. I guess Edge isn't the only one to seiz oppotunities. Very hot... |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 One of my fav oneshots with Miz in his sexy, dominating role. Sexy lemons, and Edge is just so submissive, I love it. I love Jomo, but he's and idiot for leaving Mike, lol. Awesome oneshot! These two are so adorable and hot together! |
Rhiannamator chapter 1 . 1/5/2011 Miz/Edge! Noms! I absolutely love how you've portrayed Miz. So arrogant and asshole-y. And poor Adam, unhappy and sulky even though he just won the Championship. Miz is right. It's not fair at all. Their accusations on why they're being dumped make total sense, tho. :/ Poor guys. "Fuck it. Fuck them. I have no one on this night with me. Jay isn't here. Jeff isn't here. Randy doesn't even wanna look at me. I deserve better. I wanna celebrate." Aww, poor pouty babe! None of his sexy men to celebrate with. How could no one want to satisfy that gorgeous ass? I don't understand how anyone could stray when they had Adam and their bed. But i must admit i might get a little insecure and jealous if my significant other was hovering around JoMo all the time. A spanking! :D I bet he loved it, too. Slut. XP Aww, Randy! Mean! Instead of working things out you ignore it, then go confirm Adam's suspicions? Adam may have driven him away some, but he didn't try very hard, either. If some part of him didn't want to be with JoMo it would have happened different. Tell you what, Adds. Have your one night stand with Miz, then go hit up Jeffy. He'll love you forever, even if he is insane. :P "Morrison actually won." Adam commented." *giggle* He's got you there, Miz. Flattery will get you everywhere. Including, it seems, Adam's ass. :P "Do you always take words out of context? And you so totally missed the actual point." LOL, that's what i was thinking! HAHAHA! HAH! See Randy and Morrison? See what you're missing? Bet you're sorry now! A world in which Adam gets no sex for a month is a sad world indeed. And incomprehensible. Mean Randy. Oh man oh man, Miz's transformation in bed. Kinda did me in. So very hot, lovin all over sweet Adam. "As he looked at the beauty laid before him in all its glory, he literally lost his breath." OH HELL i'd lose my breath too. Lost my breath just reading this paragraph. And for some reason i simply adored the little shout out to his age. I mean, it's not like 40 is /old/ but he's just as sexy as the heartthrobs 10-15 yrs his junior. Hell, sexier. He's just amazing. Yes yes, def take the time to appreciate, Mike. These are precious moments. And i love how neither one of them are under the delusion that this goes any further than tonight. It nice to read a casual, consensual fuck without major stress or consequences sometimes, you know? No one's cheating, no one's lying, no one's making this out to be anything other than what it is... a good night. Very good. ;) "If he was Randy, he would have taken any fits and mood swings from Adam if he had this mouth and this ass to fuck." THAT'S WHAT I'M SAYIN! Hot hot fucking hot. This is the first sex scene i've read from you and darlin, it's... damn. Adam's arms over his head, lips parted... just... such delicious images. YES! Of course Miz always wanted Adds! Who doesn't? *cackles* Gawd. Scene was so perfect. The imagery, the emotion, everything. Just... uhm. I will definitely be visiting this one again and again. Love seeing Miz top, love how he was so cocky yet so desiring of Adam, not just as a hole to fuck, but for Adam. LOL, no, not supposed to remember what's said during sex. *giggle* I'm glad Adam doesn't mind that Miz took advantage of the wondrous opportunity that presented itself. Celebratory sex and celebratory sleep are def good things, and i'm glad they're doing both together. Our champs deserve it. xD Loved this fic, hun. So much. I'm so happy you decided to start posting your stories. They're simply wonderful, luv. Looking forward to many more! :D |
x.SuspendReality.x chapter 1 . 1/3/2011 Sorry for the late review. *hides* I find it strange that the two WORLD champions are sitting in a corner, brooding. Miz had the right idea to coax Adam into celebrating, because, he SHOULD be celebrating! Even though Miz had a hidden agenda somewhat..hehe But I think everyone has that with Adam. Who wouldn't? Question: Why were Randy and John looking bothered? Didn't they think those two would move on so fast? But anyway, boy did Miz and Adam celebrate! The sex scene was hot and I like how you kept us in tune with what they were feeling throughout it. That's a big yes! Did I mention it was hot? I bet they were both feeling like Champions after that. Hmm, is that an unwritten rule? Not to remember stuff said in sex? Lol, trust Mike to say that! And since when does Adam play by the rules? He's his own man. A pretty own man though.. Ah well, love it! |
Terrahfry chapter 1 . 12/23/2010 D'aww, I appreciate you doing this for me. *hugs* Thank you so much. & eh, every time I threaten to quit I have a Jeff and Christian muse look at me w/ big ole eyes and contempt to throw a fit... then Christian muse starts feeding me ideas at Adam's expense. I've been intrigued by the concept of Randy/Mor. But awe, poor Adam. Haha, Miz interrupting Adam made me giggle for some reason. He just seemed to pop out of nowhere. "Who the hell invited you?" Even cuter. Ah, Miz, so arrogant. "Oh really? No wonder Morrison dumped your ass." Oh, burn! Lol *giggles* Nope. Miz can't just be 'civil'. Poor Mizzie :P But it's a good motive. Both have no one to celebrate their being champions with and their exes are all cozy and rubbing their faces in it. They have common ground. But oh so catty, lulz. Now, boys, we could point fingers all we want.. They're so cute. 'you did this.. well, if you didn't do that..' *amused* Awe, Addy hasn't got Jay or Jeffy there. He's alone -_- Randy didn't even congratulate him? *gasps* Randy, you bitch! Wrong! Haha, Adam's a jealous little drama queen, I see. Well, Randy should've known and accepted that :P Oh, lulz! Adam called JoMo a whore & got a spanking. Bad slut ;D I still think Randy was a dumbass. Adam jealous or not. I call premeditated cheating! "You wanna celebrate. I wanna celebrate. We both are champs for fuck sake! We shouldn't sit here and let those two losers destroy OUR night!" Miz has a point, Addy. "Morrison actually won." "Cute. Stop being a smart ass. I am trying to make a point here." *giggles madly* Oh, I love their little conversation. Adam IS the prettiest champ ever. Oh, yes indeed xD Haha, Miz called Adam the locker room slut :P But no, I get what's he's saying. Miz's making sense for once. Go on, Addy, take Miz up on it. You might have fun. & yes! Adam complies! & that kiss! OMGosh & right right in front of Randy and Mor! Awesome! Course Randy and Mor are bothered. They's just got one-uped by the exes :P Haha, that's it, Miz. Get that shit. Course Addy tastes good, do you know who you're talking about? Duh. I always have a displeasure for them being full clothed :P "Somehow he gave the impression of a man who just fucked and wasn't capable of loving anything but his cock." Aweh, give Mizzums a little credit. Adam has always been a beautiful sight to behold. Aw, sweet of Miz to take his time. Haha, Adam's glorious ass trumps all :P The Holy Grail. Ah, yes, Adam's behavioral issues, hehe. My Jeff muse sez he could deal with that and have Adam right in line ;) "Come on babe...Get me ready for your pretty little ass." *fanning* Oh gawd.. This is the Miz I wanna see. I dunno, I'm liking him here. He's arrogant, but not really in too much of an asshole way. "If he was Randy, he would have taken any fits and mood swings from Adam if he had this mouth and this ass to fuck." Tolja, Randy was a dumbass. *nods* So damn hawt! Adam sucking on Miz's fingers. *licks lips* Very pretty. Mhmmm... And Adam, the little slut, he just wants it hard! Haha! & that image of Adam, yes, so beautiful... & so bossy :P Whoops, Miz's mouth during sex.. Uhmm.. I can't imagine anyone not wanting Adam. "You really are not suppose to remember what we say during sex." But you didn't answer the question... Just like Miz to play it off. Psh, arrogant, haha. Beautiful! Amazing, hun, XD. I so enjoyed this and you did so wonderful on the sex. I deff appreciate this and thank you so much for not letting feel like I was alone. You dunno how much I treasure you right now *huggles* -Terrah |
reekazoids chapter 1 . 12/21/2010 Aww Addy's jealous. Mizzy's jealous too. I could tell Orton and Morrison were jealous too. Damn. Adam sex is hott. He really is a pretty champion. |