Another fanfic, another (maybe) sleepless night! Amazing fanfic here, bro (I’m not assuming your gender, I call everyone ‘bro’), amazingly fast-paced and a lot of twists in the plot, I absolutely love it. Nice character developement, but there are some confusing parts (for my dense head), like when Annabeth and Percy kisses, but Annabeth just calls them friends... so... yeah... I guess that’s it! I absolutely love this fic!

ummmm... how can they be half sumurged in water if they are in the ocean?

C'mon, how can Percy easily defeat all these beings from Norse Mythology which killed gods like Odin, Thor and Frey? Please try to make the story slightly accurate next time, good plot though! Cheers

Hi

Tyson does not talk like that

Its Ragnarok

I am completely loving your alternate universe. can't wait to read your Titan's Curse version.

Well, first of all, be basically is.

the chapter is really good

The Laurentian Abyssal is in addition to Canada. just say so.

dude bring some hot and steamy stuff

I know you probably won't see this for a while, I saw your bio, but I just wanted you to know that this story and the first "champion of olympus" story are some of the best I've read in a while! Great job!

cant wait to read the next one

what gonna happen

intresting