Aw hell, this is really great!

This was awesome. Could you add more

O_O

Okay. Well it's not like I needed my heart or anything. I'll just have to figure out how to live without it.

Seriously... that was so good. Amazing. A realistic alternative to what might have happened. But POOR SAM, jesus. Let me give the boy a hug.

Thank you for the great read!

Looks like Death really needs to talk to the Engineers that designed that wall. There was definitely a few glaring design flaws and some issues with durability and capability of the end product. Definitely didn't leave up to the hype here, leaving behind a very damaged grapefruit that it was supposed to be protecting. Probably should double check the warranty on that wall as well. Looks like this Sam isn't going to get away with just having visions of Lucifer trying to drive him crazy or kill him. Thank you for posting.

Short but, good!

I loved this. I loved the loud and I loved how I could almost feel Sam's pain and Dean's worry.

This is fantastic! You have no idea how badly I wish this had actually happened on the show. Giving Sam's trip to hell a little more air-time would've been nice, but that's what fanfics are for, right? And yours definitely satisfied my angst meter for the day. Such great writing! Love it!

Love it!

Amazing fic. Your writing style blows me away! Really, really awesome. Great work! :)

so i'm spending my lunch reading this on a crappy computer where the shift key and the space bar don't work because all my friends either don't do further maths or think nano particle lectures are much more fun than talking to me. so yeah,i can see why you're oodles of fans who have an evil plan to make you leave the wicked section wanted you to write a second part it was rater good and, natrally, dead depressing. so yeah annoyingly i'm going to want to actually read the next part now. so in conclusion you're annoying in a good way. i probably should go as the bell's rung and i'm sure the person who thinks fanfic's nerdy is juding me even though she says she's not. so yeah c; - bad smilie cos shift key doesn't work

I'm ... speechless.

I really don't have words to explain how good this is.

That was lovely, but so ridiculously sad. I love how you use Dean in it-he does anything to help his baby brother

That was so good! I loved the emotion, and even though I obviously don't want Sam to go crazy, the plot was great and Sam's thoughts at the end were characterized so well! Yay. That was a good read :) Thanks for writing!

AWWWWW love it!

If there's any way I want the rest of season 6 to go well THIS IS IT.

Thanks for the awesome story, and even the hopeful ending! LOVE IT!

Ok so first off, OMG! that was, WOW, fantastic. To creep inside someones mind like you did and pull out a description of their insanity and display is so clearly and crisply as you have is just, well, awe inspiring. I absolutely loved this and would hope if I BEGGED that you would continue it and give us the points of view of Dean and Bobby as well, you know how Sam's deterioration was effecting them as well. My God this was so damn good! I sure hope you'd consider more chapters. Maybe set it a month after Sam goes coo coo. Or have Cas come and heal him to some degree. Please please? Thanks so much for this wonderfully written, thought out, and uberly entertaining story, thanks again, Nicole.