| Reviews for Concessions |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 7/18/2016 It's been years since you wrote this but I could continue reading it into infinity. Please finish! |
 shadowflame89 chapter 10 . 7/10/2015 Wow, what an awesome story! I couldn't stop reading it! I hope you manage to finish it someday, i really loved it! |
| Noutchka chapter 10 . 1/14/2015 Omg I hope there is a next chapter coming up because this story is truly excellent :) I looove it |
| springfieldbluebird chapter 10 . 5/30/2014 Ok, it's been a while since you wrote this thing. It's one of the best A-Team stories ever. You must finish it! You write these guys so perfectly! |
| springfieldbluebird chapter 8 . 5/30/2014 Sooooo good! You rock! |
| springfieldbluebird chapter 6 . 5/30/2014 Can I just say that you've written one of the best "Murdocks" that I've ever read? Wow. The whirling, twisting of his thoughts came through so perfectly. I love how Hannibal makes "the gleam" a good thing. Oh my. You've torn at my heart with how HAPPY Murdock is that he gets to keep his wings. This is brilliance! |
| springfieldbluebird chapter 4 . 5/30/2014 OMG! the "young priest and an old priest" just cracked me the hell up! LOL! That was wonderful. You handled this from Face's point of view perfectly. I saw a note that you hadn't finished this yet. I understand. BUT YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY. I'm already in love with it. |
| springfieldbluebird chapter 3 . 5/30/2014 Oh my goodness. I had to devour three chapters before I could slow down enough to comment. This is brilliant. You have a knack for showing the serious, dark sides to Murdock's character. I love how you have built the relationship between Face and Hannibal. The van thing (the model) was a spark of genius! (loved the glue gun and electrical equipment quip!) I really enjoy someone who can handle all the guys and make them REAL instead of "campy" like on the TV show. Bravo! Can't wait to read the rest of this and more comments to follow! |
| JoJo1812 chapter 10 . 3/26/2014 Love your story! Would very much like you to update :P |
| Book girl fan chapter 7 . 2/22/2014 Yeah, I don't think that worked quite as he expected. |
| Moviemuncher chapter 10 . 10/13/2013 Oh Murdock! Bless you're sweet heart! This idea is ridiculously good! But is it to be continued? Please :) |
| Freakylady666 chapter 10 . 3/7/2013 This is great, will you be continuing it? |
| The-Time-Travelling-Hippie chapter 2 . 12/23/2012 I love the intensity of this chapter. And this is possibly my favourite line: 'Face was used to Hannibal's methods so he hadn't really paid attention, just sighed and made a mental note to hide his moisturisers and leave-in conditioners from BA and Murdock. BA because Face knew teasing would be inevitable, and Murdock because he'd probably try to eat them or something.' Great writing. |
| Gembomz chapter 10 . 12/21/2012 AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
| The-Time-Travelling-Hippie chapter 10 . 11/20/2012 Why isn't there more?! /\-/\ |
