Reviews for To be immortal
Qisthzy chapter 21 . 12/18/2019
Thank you for writing this wonderful Bellice masterpiece 3
Qisthzy chapter 19 . 12/18/2019
Cutie lovely babies
Qisthzy chapter 18 . 12/18/2019
Glad that Bellice love is strong and unbreakable!
Qisthzy chapter 17 . 12/18/2019
Lol that butt accident I’m wheezing
Qisthzy chapter 15 . 12/18/2019
Sweet sweet love~
Qisthzy chapter 14 . 12/18/2019
Still bugging me why Bella can’t hear Alice’s conversation with Jasper on call since Vampires have a very good hearing or Bella’s have a very good quality soundproof apartment (?)
Qisthzy chapter 10 . 12/18/2019
At least they’re official now haha
Qisthzy chapter 9 . 12/18/2019
No offense but i don’t like it how they playing push n pull it’s more like they’re human n human rather than vampire n vampire. But good that finally they telling the truth
Qisthzy chapter 7 . 12/18/2019
I see seems your story is like a chosen mate not like a mate true mate altho it’s weird for Vampires since they can know their mate when they meet or see each others haha
Qisthzy chapter 6 . 12/18/2019
Like finally Alice confessing to Bella. I’m curious are they mate or you have your own system for your story n plot author? haha
Qisthzy chapter 2 . 12/18/2019
Yes girl go find and get your lover!
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 10 . 10/26/2018
So Victoria isnt dead because she didn't light her on fire after taking off her head.
ThunderSphinx chapter 18 . 11/18/2017
Doesn't Victoria have a special Survival Skill? How did Edward and Jacob manage to kill her? In canon, Edward was only able to kill her because she ignored her skill because she did not care whether she lived or died; her only thought to was to kill Bella. She didn't care about anything else; that was her only focus.

Damn, is whiny Edward annoying; I never liked him, lol. The only good thing Edward managed to do was help create Renesmeè and even then he hated her and wanted to murder her in Rosalie's arms.

I'm glad that Jacob isn't pushy. Poor Jake tho. Hopefully, he finds somebody else quickly since Nessie isn't around for him. He deserves to have a special someone.
ThunderSphinx chapter 17 . 11/18/2017
I'm sorry but why should Bella hide from her father? She didn't hide from him in canon after she turned into a vampire. Is this just to add angst?

If Bella truly loves her dad, she would keep in touch with him. She's being selfish.
andrewpine chapter 20 . 9/2/2016
Maybe they will get lucky and Eddie will meet his mate then him and Eddie will go away on a long vacation.
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