This was fantastic! I don't read many stories with an emotionally mature Ron in them, but when I do they're really well done, as this was. It always seems to be Luna's involvement that makes him that way too, which I like. The conversation that the three of them have while Harry is unconscious isn't a conversation that would be taking place in most Harmony fics.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the idea of the medical transport team made up of house elves and the fact that Hermione was the one to push to make it happen. It sounds like something Hermione would do and it allowed her to give house elves work as opposed to servitude, which is something else that Hermione would do. I also liked that Hermione embraced Luna's quirks. It always bothered me that, in canon, Hermione and Luna didn't become as good of friends as they could have simply because Hermione stubbornly refused to see past Luna's quirks to the smart girl that she was for the longest time. I mean, if you had asked Hermione before she learned about the magical world whether magic was real or not, she probably would have said no and thought it ridiculous that it could be real. Once she learned that it was real and saw it for herself, though, you'd think that she would have gotten past the whole notion that anything is possible whether she could prove it was or not.

Beautiful I love it. Especially the ending. Nice work buddy

Touching. Especially the end of the last sentence. Let's see where this goes

Wow, the sequel is even better than its predecessor! I'm blown away by the storyline, the characters and the emotions them all! You did a fantastic job in showing Hermione's worry over Harry's condition, her heartfelt confession to him, and of course his confession in return! I especially enjoyed reading the conversation (and more) that took place after Harry finally woke up ;-)

Kudos to on you a job well done! This was an amazing story, and I can't wait to read more!

A great ending, with Harry and hermione saying the things that were in their hearts. They finally cast out fear.

I love this story.

D. Page Robin

An excellent chapter. You've done a fine job setting us up for the action. The way you have the trio and Luna work together, particularly Hermione's role makes a lot of sense to me.

Ron as empathetic is really what JKR wanted, but didn't deliver in canon. It is nice to have a good and mature Ron.

It is also wonderful that Hermione confesses her feelings for Harry. Now all she needs to do is to do so when he's conscious.

D. Page Robin

yyesss hermione's feeling have comes out! and finally he confessed too!

Poor Ron! Oh well, at least Luna will comfort him! :-)

Bleh, didn't get more than halfway through this chapter. The words you're putting in Ron's mouth would sound stilted and pompous spoken by a middle-aged politician, never mind someone who's still allegedly a *teenager*.

Loved this! Thanks!

Excellent chapter. I love the idea of Hermione as a healer.

I really enjoyed this one! Excellent writing style, well thought-out plot, and overall well executed.

You managed to hit all of my favourites: Harry and Hermione, Ron and Luna, no Weasley/Dumbledore bashing, and post-DH. Like a story written just for me :)

Keep it up!

Bloody awesome story, well written and thought out.

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Intense, then scary, then sweetness. I love it! :)

excellent short story