Aww that was cute! I know it's odd, but winter fics always make me feel festive, even if they aren't about Christmas!

Awwww... that was cute! and itz snowin my house right now and last time i checked it was a foot deep. This story got me in the mood! Thanx :)

I really liked it. It was sweet with the lovely Matsumoto touch.

so cuteee~

oh my god you did that without snacks or soda! you truly are amazing

aww this was soo cute.

I loved it, HitsuKarin are adorable

nice oneshot!

Pretty impressive and fluffy for three hours' work! It's very cute and appropriate for the holiday season, and nothing stood out grammatically erroneous to me, so that's good! What did slightly stick out, though, was Isshin's behavior. I guess the 'Isshin-wanting-grandchildren' scene has been played so many times I'm more used to it than the other way around (Isshin being superduper protective), but I couldn't help feeling that he was waaaay too serious in this story. Other than that, good job with this story and the coupling~

awww, so adorable! i totally heart hitsukarin and this totally made my day. Happy Birthday to Toshiro! X3

This was so cute! I really enjoyed. Good job!

Aw, really cute story! I love his present to Karin, so cute. And how he didn't know what to get for her either. Though how Karin managed to get that watermelon in the middle of winter is truly astounding _

Very nice one-shot, especially considering those lack of snacks and soda to keep you company. :)