Ummm... I'm new 2 this app and I was messing w/ the settings and now it's stuck on white on black instead of black on white if anyone can help me w/ this I'd REALLY appreciate it thx

Not bad at all! That's quite a good metaphor and I enjoyed the juxtaposition.

Wow. This is one of the most beautiful fics I have ever read. Extremely powerful, it's rare to find a piece of work as brilliant as this. I just love the contrast between the characters and your descriptions and imagery are fantastic. Well done!

This is really good. It's incredibly poetic, and it conveys the message perfectly. The imagery is fabulous, and I'm shocked that this hasn't been reviewed yet.