So I know it’s been a while since you posted this, but I had to add my cry for an update to everyone else’s. This is such a brilliant piece of work. All your writing is wonderful, and this is no exception. I love how the story flows together so well. The characters are written so well and in character. And, of course, I love a good angst filled story so this story really meets all of my desires. I have read almost all your Narnia stories and all of the are so good.
I actually created an account just so I could tell you this, so please, please, if you still enjoy this fandom, finish this. Because this story is so beautiful and I need it in my life. I also can’t stand cliffhangers and I need to know what Edmund was going to say.
I would offer to finish this story, but I couldn’t live up to your writing, so my only hope is that you (or another talented writer) will finish this.
I totally get that life is busy and sometimes you fall out of a fandom, so I understand if you can’t or won’t finish it. So even if the answer is no, I hope you have a great day and this comment brings a smile to your face.

Nooooooo! I need this to be finished!

O my gosh! Please finishhhhhhhh...it's so good...

This has to be the sweetest Edmund and Peter story I have ever read. 3

Wow interesting story.

PLEASE FINISH THIS

I hope you continue, I need to know what happened even if it has been six years! I love this story, hope you see this and write some more!

Hmm very good for I look forward to seeing you update again.

ok so maybe its been 6 yrs or actually i think it would be more accurate if i say i say 5 yrs but u seriously need to update this i mean like poor eddyyyyyyyyy u cant leave hime like this forever frozen in time forever as a weak little boy (although that kinda sounds adorable i dont wanna make him suffer this much especially with peter fussing over him) so yea i absolutely looovvveeeeee ur narnia fics and ive just noticed that youve stopped writing them which really breaks my heart (ok maybe not breaks breaks but ur narnia fics r just the BEST! so anyways the point is

PLZZZZZZZZ PLEASEEEEE (there u go u made me write the correct spelling :P) UPDATEEEE! MY LIFE DEPENDS ON THIS! :) 3

So did Edmund try to drown himself?!

Btw I know u haven't updated in forever but PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE!

Awww, this is so cute! I really like how when they brought Edmund in all wet and Peter's all worried.

Oh please continue this. I am dying to know what is going on with Edmund and what he isnt telling Peter! But so far, this is amazing! Love your description and use of scenery and details. Susan and Lucy are how I expect them to be/act and for Peter and Edmund...Love the brotherly love between them!
Im literally begging you to continue this! Please!

I really enjoyed reading this! However I happened to have seen 'Puss in Boots' right before this so when I came to the place where Edmund stumbled and Peter caught him, I had the must amusing picture of a drenched black cat with the cutest set of eyes clinging to Peter, alnog with the most petulant, defiant and pitifull expression... I laughed my head off and had to take a break to sober up before I could continue reading this;D Just wanted to share my rather amusing mental instability;P hope you enjoyed it as much as I did:$

Can you please please update this? This is by far one of the best ones that I read on this subject. It deserves a continuation :)and you are very talented please don't make me go on with my imagination.

Oh! Update!