Don't like the end

Well,..it is your fic. I found the ending very...unique. Sometimes shit just goes bad for the heroes. Sometimes there is a consequence to having power. Naruto and Sasuke just...they were never meant to have a happy life from the beginning of your fic, were they? I have read some fics were terrible, painful things happened to those two, but this by far is worst. To live on borrowed time, most parents would sort of be ok with knowing their potential demise, but are happy knowing that their children are saved from the future the parents saved them from. The monsters of their time. But to know that you will live to see them take but not gone, to know you can't fix it, save them. To know the only way to set his soul free, their souls free is to end it. The lives, whatever they want to call it, borrowed time, to just die. That is a VERY sad ending.
I did enjoy the read, don't get me wrong. That was just a shocker. I did get a feeling that there should have been more. Don't know. Like something's missing. I'll have to think on it. Thanks for the read.

"thats nice sasuke" fucking killed me XD

WHO PUTS ONIONS IN A SANDWICH. THATS LIKE EATING SHREK! I would rather eat rat poison then an onion. (~goes to shrek~) I'm sorry you had to hear this my friend

OMGAWD I KNEW IT! when sasuke got punched i got the idea that madara was only using sasuke to impregnate Naruto then he would do something and madara would live with Naruto and the kid! OMGAWD you are a genius! C:

i love how madara explained to sasuke why sasuke and naruto would be perfect canon XD

Please let Naruto and sasuke and itachi and little Hikari be alright.

Obito needs a good beating for what he done to Konoha and Minato and kushina and uchiha clan.

Please update. ;)

Good chapter.

A baby boy and what's the child' s name going to be?.

Please update.

I wonder if Naruto will have twins?.

I love itachi he's very nice and kind soul.

Please bring itachi back alive.