Awww

Very sad and memory jerking. Just out of curiosity, are the scars from say, the 10th Doctor still on the 11th Doctor's body, or dies he re-cut them?

My god. If permission i would like to do a redo of this with my character. And i will give you full credit because it was not my idea. Of course. If no then i wont do it okay. Keep up with this great work! ;)

what was in the box?

Ohhhh...

Ohhh, I love you for this...

Thank you.

*HUGS*

Mandy

This story. I've come back to it at least three times now, just absorbing myself in it. You capture the Doctor, the essence of the wonderful man-but-not-human, absolutely perfectly. I've had to leave so many stories in the past, cringing because people just can't write the Doctor. You can.
This is hauntingly beautiful. As a self-harmer, I could feel this - not just read and understand, but actually feel the emotions. I'd love to read more, but it's also brilliant standing alone like this.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
xx

I love it so much, it's beatifully written too, not cliche. are you going to follow it up?

That was just sososo sad. The terribe thing is, I can actually see the Doctor doing this. It seems to make complete sense, but it's absoutely impossible, which is exactly like the Doctor. I'm also glad you've seemed to have noticed the emotional stuff going on with the Eleventh Doctor, too. Anyway, good writing.

Excellently written, I applaud you!

Oh snap!

Oh wow. This is so so good. You've tapped in to all the angst we know is lurking under 11's cheerful exterior. Lovely job.

very good :D but way more people have died for the doctor, way way way more, don't ever forget the older series

Poor doctor. Loved the ending, a pain shared is a pain halfed.

Great job! A short, simple, great story! You have a good writing style. I'm very impressed!

Loved it. Absolutely.