I first read this at school next to boys who were listening and singing along to Gangman style...worst fourth hour ever. Now I read it again and I'm happier than ever! Thanks

I think you should continue this story. I think it would be an awesome fan-fiction with more than just one chapter. Like, here's a segestion. Make it so that Oswald feels a thup here and there in his chest. And when it gets farther into the story, have it be two thups, then three, and so on and so forth. Until Oswald and all the forgotten toons have their hearts back and can go back to the real world. I think this could make an excelent story.

P.S,
I LOVE OSWALD!

This was so sweet! I loved how you portrayed Ortensia it seemed fitting for her. You can gather her personality from the cartoons. Pretty much she's a very loving sort and Oswald is her world, so...I think you did a good job portraying her :)

That was really good. I liked Epic Mickey, and I hope that we get to see more of Oswald and Ortensia!

Just finished the game and I have to say that I think you nailed Ortesia's personality. Sure, we don't get much, but still. It makes sense that she would catch things Oswald somehow doesn't, like Pete's latest power grab. And she advises him. They're married after all and its ideal for your other half to make up where you lack.

Loved the glimpse into post-Blot Wasteland in this. :)

This overall piece was well written. It led up to Oswald's decision/vow at the end very nicely. I hope they *can* see the real sky again one day.

Great job! It'd be nice to see a continuation of this someday, if you feel up to it.

Very cute story you got here.

I just finished the game, and, though we only see Ortensia for a little bit, this feels about right.

Very good job.

I LOVED this great job!

really awesome job.

i love how you describe...well, everything.

And Oswalds thoughts was sooo beautiful.

I like everythin about this :D

This was so cute. The writing was very good. Ortensia and Oswald are just as cute as Mickey and Minnie together (maybe cuter), and you were able to draw that out spectacularly. Great job. Keep Writing!

I loved Oswald's attitude in this story. He realizes that time won't always still for him and the others in Wasteland.

Meeting his brother was all it took and he won't fear the future regardless what it may be.

Excellent work.

Aw, so sweet. You did a good job of capturing Oswald's personality and his feelings about Mickey. He no longer holds a grudge against him for what he'd done, but he does still seem to feel a little inferior to his more popular brother, and it almost seems (stop me if I'm wrong) that there may be rooom in the furture for a grude to form again. Wonderful job, beautifully written

This is adorable!. I love these two as well.:)

the closest we can get to Ortensia actually speaking are the Tales of the Wasteland digicomics (and there are scans of them on Flickr)! but even those don't help much 'cause she rarely says anything that show her characteristics, so we only have to assume she's a lot like Minnie.:/

LOVE THE STORY!:D

I love this! Gosh, it's so awesome! *U* Love it! This is gorgeous! You draw up Oswald, Ortensia (love what you did with her), and their world so beautifully...! *U* Everything's so realistic, and I LOVE IT! *U* Rock on!