the fact that you made 420 words feel like 2000 is absolutely amazing! I rarely find anyone here that can do that.

Good

:D Yeah, the story might be old, but I did love it.

This is a very well-written story! I like the coding lines and statistics that help enforce the fact that he's a program. :)

Mngnngnnannahaaaaaa...

Spectacular. Beautiful. I adore you brilliant writers who possess the ability to write computer programs in character. A perfect explanation for what, in the movie, seemed a little forced.

Much love!

This is so cool! I love the style it's written in.

This is so unique! Rinzler is def, one of my favorite programs, but he's also one of the quietest. I always wanted to know what he was thinking during that pursuit. Amazing job!

Love it! I salute you; you wrote the the fic that I tried to write with my own story about the moment. *thumb up*

Loved it. You did a great job writing my favorite scene of the movie.

For me, I feel like the voice in italics sounds more like Kevin Flynn's. Oh well, that's my opinion anywhoo. Lots of really good Tron-centered fics these days!

Wow this is actually really good and well-written. It was short but sweet. The contrast is great and creates great tension. The characterization is spot-on too. Well-done.

Wow...I love this. It's brilliant.

The inner dialogue is excellent.

The stark contrast between Rinzler and Tron is glaring and powerful, mirroring the themes of perfection vs imperfection in the movie.

The computer lingo is really well-placed!

Sharp, hard, fast and perfectly to the point. I love it.

oh yeah I like this one!

nice one-shot. liked how you depicted Tron and Rinzler as two separate beings. 'I fight for the users' was my favorite line in the movie. you've inspired me to write my own Tron Legacy fic. keep up the good work.